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CocoaCollidoscope
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Oh *jumps up and down clapping hands, squealing loudly* That was a wonderful treat!
Katmarajade
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Oh dear sweet Harry. Great idea about the phobia of the lake. I never thought on it before, but it makes a lot of sense. I can't see the Dursleys shelling out money for his swim lessons after all. Poor, sweet kid thinking that he's most important to no one-- that's just heartbreaking. Also, greatly enjoyed that they'd gone on a date and Harry hadn't even noticed. That was awesome. Oh, dear sweet boys and their crazy cluelessness.
Twig'um
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
AW OH MY GOD THAT IS SUCH AN ADORABLE ENDING! I love how they go on a date and Harry doesn't even get it. :P what a social retard!
candydive
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
i was nearly crying when they dumped him in the lake and no one cared enough tp check he was in trouble.
&& i thought all the while about his acceptance letter that he was so proud of and how it would be ruined if he ever got out of there ><

its really emotionally written and the ending wonderfully fluffy! lovely!
Dark Blue Eyed Angel
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
poor harry!! the last part was cute!
YazzyDream
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
That was really sweet and well written! They were in character and I enjoyed it, even shed a tear or two. :)
lolasail4
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
you have a unique penchant for making me cry while reading your stories. Not many authors can do that to me. bravo!
bloodgolore
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Aw, such a sweet ending. Surprisingly I cried for this one too! You do have superpowers! I'm sure of it! I have no idea why I was crying! I guessed that the Hogsmeade thing was Ron trying to, um, whatever Harry.

Oh, I just love everything you write!
gothic-hands
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
very cute story
LaurenWinchester
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
OMG, I love this story!! Poor Harry, I felt so terrible for him. And your Ron is just adorable (even if I sometimes wanted to smack him for being so oblivious, lol). =)
Kenpachinara
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
That was...really good...FANTASTIC EVEN!
I loved it!
Crazilyinsanelady
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
This is the third time taht I've read this story. It keeps popping up in my searches for some odd reason. And every time I cry, and curse at Ron. Then at Harry. And then at the giant squid.

So, I thought that maybe if I took the time to review, it would stop popping up every freaking time I try to use the search engine.

And then I won't cry anymore.

Hopefully.


...

WAH!

~Crazilyinsanelady

(P.S.- YOU ROCK!)
Laurenke1
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
very nice

I loved it. Very sweet and cute
k13cat
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
A wonderfully angsty story. It really captures a side of Harry that I can believe in.

Yet, so much wonderful time was used to build up Harry's feelings & the heart aching angst the final section feels very sudden. It feels too easy. (and I can't really see Harry not hexing seamus). I guess its a case of you did such a great job weaving the emotional fabric for Harry at the beginning that the end doesn't seem quite as rich. I still enjoyed the story and think it was overall wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing some H/R.
Athena
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
i don't read harry/ron that often but this one shot was rather sweet in an angsty sort of way.
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