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Katmarajade
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Oh dear sweet Harry. Great idea about the phobia of the lake. I never thought on it before, but it makes a lot of sense. I can't see the Dursleys shelling out money for his swim lessons after all. Poor, sweet kid thinking that he's most important to no one-- that's just heartbreaking. Also, greatly enjoyed that they'd gone on a date and Harry hadn't even noticed. That was awesome. Oh, dear sweet boys and their crazy cluelessness.
Twig'um
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
AW OH MY GOD THAT IS SUCH AN ADORABLE ENDING! I love how they go on a date and Harry doesn't even get it. :P what a social retard!
candydive
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
i was nearly crying when they dumped him in the lake and no one cared enough tp check he was in trouble.
&& i thought all the while about his acceptance letter that he was so proud of and how it would be ruined if he ever got out of there ><

its really emotionally written and the ending wonderfully fluffy! lovely!
Dark Blue Eyed Angel
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
poor harry!! the last part was cute!
YazzyDream
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
That was really sweet and well written! They were in character and I enjoyed it, even shed a tear or two. :)
lolasail4
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
you have a unique penchant for making me cry while reading your stories. Not many authors can do that to me. bravo!
bloodgolore
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Aw, such a sweet ending. Surprisingly I cried for this one too! You do have superpowers! I'm sure of it! I have no idea why I was crying! I guessed that the Hogsmeade thing was Ron trying to, um, whatever Harry.

Oh, I just love everything you write!
gothic-hands
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
very cute story
LaurenWinchester
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
OMG, I love this story!! Poor Harry, I felt so terrible for him. And your Ron is just adorable (even if I sometimes wanted to smack him for being so oblivious, lol). =)
Kenpachinara
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
That was...really good...FANTASTIC EVEN!
I loved it!
Crazilyinsanelady
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
This is the third time taht I've read this story. It keeps popping up in my searches for some odd reason. And every time I cry, and curse at Ron. Then at Harry. And then at the giant squid.

So, I thought that maybe if I took the time to review, it would stop popping up every freaking time I try to use the search engine.

And then I won't cry anymore.

Hopefully.


...

WAH!

~Crazilyinsanelady

(P.S.- YOU ROCK!)
Laurenke1
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
very nice

I loved it. Very sweet and cute
k13cat
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
A wonderfully angsty story. It really captures a side of Harry that I can believe in.

Yet, so much wonderful time was used to build up Harry's feelings & the heart aching angst the final section feels very sudden. It feels too easy. (and I can't really see Harry not hexing seamus). I guess its a case of you did such a great job weaving the emotional fabric for Harry at the beginning that the end doesn't seem quite as rich. I still enjoyed the story and think it was overall wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing some H/R.
Athena
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
i don't read harry/ron that often but this one shot was rather sweet in an angsty sort of way.
afraidofreality
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
OMG all your stories make me cry, mascara everywhere, but wow, I love Harry/Ron in this story, wow when you write its so emotionally manipulative that you just cant help but feel, laugh and cry with the characters, they come to life, its beautiful. :]
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