hahahaha denzel didnt even notice!
hurry update!

god, i love that chapter!! Where is vincents 'joke' from? =o i must know!! oh well =) i love how its all set on the phone. you captured the characters SO well! and also, are tifas eyes red? in the original game, i think they are, but in the movie, are they at all red at any time? =o interesting!

what? so Thwack's a word and Twitchy isnt? what the hell...?
that was a really cute chapter- it was humerous in a subtle way =)

aw! that was a really sweet chapter ^o^ i really like this series because you describe breifly without waffling on for ages xD i also like it because...i just really do! also, there are tons of chapters so it shall keep me happy for a long time =)

LMAO!! gotta luv Emily!! this was worth the wait, update soonz!! 8D

Very cute! Great job!

I think you might have to start saying who's perspective each chapter is in, because I spent almost half of it trying to figure out which character it could be. I mean really, how many characters' names start with the letter R? Reno, Rude, Rufus, Reeve... It's insane! O__O Other than my confusion, this chapter was as great as they always are. I LOVE Tifa's response to Reeve calling her fat, that was great. I feel kind of bad for her though, because she had a perfect figure until Cloud turned her into a baby factory. XD And I don't blame Cloud for wanting photographic evidence of Barret crying; I'd want to see that too! Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and you'll let us know when you post the absolute final chapter, right? I've got a big review typed up for it, so I don't want to miss my chance to leave you one last review for this story. :3

ouchkabibbles :D
I thought was the only one who said that ^-^

Hey, if a fourth kid does come along, maybe by that time Reeve'll have met a good old friend called subtle reaction. XD

Aww, thus the parents bid Denzel off to college... but hey, at least he'll be able to endure it with Marlene :3 and I love how insistent Emily is! Definitely the epitome of her parents rolled into one. I wonder what's to be expected of lil' Ben and number three. x3

*Snrk* Eight scholarships... XDD

I've been reading this story since this afternoon and I'm really glad I did. I enjoyed every chapter I came across (even re-read them when I got home, just like tonight).

And this chapter made me laughed out loud the most. I liked how you had Cid caught Cloud red handed. That talk, too. The way Cloud tries to pick his answer was like a child trying to cover up something. I really liked it. And I can't stop grinning.

oh man this had me laughing the whole time i was in the cafe on campus of my college, people kept giving me weird looks ne. oh well, good read though...

ahahah! I love how you're STILL going with this story! And don't get me wrong, I kind of hope it never ends... Anyhow, another excellent chapter! Hope there are more epilogues still to come?

XD I'm having a fun time reading the epilogues
It's interesting that you're writing in so many POVs
Keep up the great work!

A mini-Cloud! Aw ;D

Ha...

Wonder how quickly Denzel learned about the birds and the bees living in that house.

Another great chapter.