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Rolf 17
2008-10-08
ch 6,
abuseYou can't stop here! You can't stop for a YEAR. Please continue.
Phoenix414
2008-08-30
ch 6,
abuseI really hope you don't intend to leave us hanging. I hope you finish this.
Vayedra
2007-12-31
ch 6,
abuseHey ya!
Are you gonna finish that story?
I hope so 'coz I really like it and want to know the end of it,
so please keep on writing!
P.S. I wish you a happy new year!
nikita6725
2007-11-10
ch 6,
abusehey just checking in to see if youve added anymore to this story yet i hope you havent given up on it as it is a great story and well written and i would love to see gibbs get hold of tonys father hope to read more from you soon thanks
Nychta Brhoche
2007-11-08
ch 6,
abuseHey, did DiNozzo Sr. shoot you instead of Abby?

This is pretty readable... so how about finishing it?? There's just LOADS of unfinished NCIS fic and it's really beginning to grate on me. I mean, hey, I KNOW real life can be a biatch on steroids but this is your story, surely you have some idea what happened...

C'mon, throw us a chapter or two; I mean it's only been what 9 months, surely SOME ideas have floated thru...
poohbear123
2007-10-15
ch 6,
abusegreat story how about finishing it.
light
2007-09-02
ch 6, anon.
abuselove it! more please;)
sentarla
2007-05-12
ch 6,
abusemore,more.more.more you can't leave us there...please
fanfiction-freak
2007-04-09
ch 6,
abuseAh! EVIL! Why'd you stop THERE, of all places! GR... UPDATE!
nikita
2007-03-20
ch 6, anon.
abusehope you come back to this story soon cant wait for the meeting of tonys dand and Gibbs update soon please thanks
TnTornado
2007-03-04
ch 6,
abusereally cool story here - I hope you update soon, can't wait to find out what happens not only to Abby, but also to Tony/Ziva.

TnTornado
aithreachas
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseJust found your story...very well done so far. Please see this through. I can assure you that I will read. You have an easy writing style and a good way with dialogue. You have done very well by our favorite characters here...please continue. Thanks.
Burning Phoenix
2007-02-07
ch 6,
abuseAH! I hate cliff hangers. Especially the good ones. I can't wait for the rest. NCIS is my favorite TV show of all time. I really like the whole idea behind this fic too. It's really interesting... I hope they kill Tony's dad.
CripticWolf
2007-02-06
ch 6,
abusegeez cliffhanger much? lol please update soon =)
Nightwing Gurl
2007-02-06
ch 6,
abuseno no no NO! I can't believe you left things hanging there! oh c'mon be nice... coz ur so evil!
I hate cliffhangers like this chapter!
now you'll just have to do is update ASAP!
coz im so eager to know whats gonna happen
oki? update soon..

NWG
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