 adnahc. 2007-02-17 . chapter 9OMFG!
Poor Kyo-Kun
I think he kissed her because he couldn't have her.
this is good.
At first i thought lei was going to be cheating on her,
and then run to KYo.
:D
-Kamura |
 Annie 2006-11-03 . chapter 5 I love it! I aodre Kyou&Kagura |
 Takeru Takaishi's Gurl 2006-11-01 . chapter 5OMG I LOVE THiS STORY! i cant wait for the next chapter! |
 prettypinkpeacock 2006-10-26 . chapter 4sighh.. i LOVE this storyy!
can u make the next chapter longer? |
 LikeAnObsession 2006-10-25 . chapter 4Hey this won't be as long as my past reviews I promise!
Well first of all, good job on this chapter. You're chapter lengths, at least for this story, has increased very beautifully and the structure makes it easier to read.
I should really award you for such a beautiful job on this and thanks to neko-ino I have seen your fanart for it too!
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Outcasted-Gypsy |
 LikeAnObsession 2006-10-25 . chapter 3Hey, Shiza-san.
I am loving this because its very original. It strays from the curse so we'll probably find out later why the curse is broken. We have an older Kyou and Kagura. A less obsessed overly enthusastic Kagura who seems to have some more common sense and the same old Kyou! Yay!
Oh he didn't believe it was a social call when obviously it was that is just what Kyou would do. Or at least I think he would do. You have even managed to keep them in character - where needed lol, Kagura isn't for obvious reasons. Did I say I love this fanfiction?
Well I'm off to read your update! Yay! You're one of my favourite authors - solely for this fanfiction alone.
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Outcasted-Gypsy |
 LikeAnObsession 2006-10-25 . chapter 2Did I tell you that I love this story.
Shiza-san your writing has improved dramatically just by reading this and I do not only mean the types of story you are writing. Your grammer has improved too!
I loved this chapter because it shows how entusastic Kagura has become and I just love that for Kags. Well anyway, Kyou kept her number and he must have a reason for doing so.
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Outcasted-Gypsy |
 LikeAnObsession 2006-10-25 . chapter 1Hey! This is interesting, I would never had thought of Kagura as an airhostess when she was older. Yet when I think about it she would have the right qualities now that she has changed.
Although I must say, I prefer her like this and Kyou is obviously going to fall for her! Although you seem to be planning something big. I can tell!
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Outcasted-Gypsy |
 Odetoblue 2006-10-16 . chapter 2really good! |
 animeboy-12 2006-09-20 . chapter 1this is very interesting...keep it up. |
 prettypinkpeacock 2006-09-19 . chapter 1hmm.. good story, but theres quite a few grammatical mistakes and run ons and stuff, making it hard to read
but update soon!
:D |
 Serinity's angel 2006-09-19 . chapter 1I really, like this so far! I'll be watching this story.
peace out,
SERINITY'S ANGEL ^_~ |