aw poor mihawk! loved it! :D

LMAO, you made me laugh while eating cherries. My computer is stained now. I love you.

Poor Mihawk. XD

--WK

Lol. Wow, just came across this fic. Man I'm still laughing! You gotta continue this. BTW I think using "censored" is hilarious. I'm picturing Mihawk saying it only I'm hearing that funny beep thing. *thumbs up* If you actually put the swear words in I think the humor would be lost.

Yay! Mihawk and Shanks! Awesome fic! Continue?

That was kind of funny. It's trying to go somewhere, I guess I'll stick with it. Ignore the reviewer who said to insert more profanity; profanity cheapens the human tounge. Shanks is like a kid...after all, he did make fun of Luffy every chance he got. Keep it up.

*snickers* Heh. Fun. Poor, poor Mihawk-san. *nodnod*

Wow. This is the first review I've posted in a while. I'm gonna have to fix that.

...WTF? Since you obviously have no problem with the idea of profanity, why not just bump up the rating, and put the actual words in? Being excessively profane is generally pretty annoying and juvenile anyways, but what you're doing is just plain stupid.

It's great so far, Ha-chan! Love it! Can't wait to read the next part!