   dancing elf 4/14/11 . chapter 1so sweet |
| lalalalala 9/26/06 . chapter 1 oh, so cute! |
| NephthysAmaya 9/20/06 . chapter 1 Very nice! Unique and well written too. Awesome. |
| Growing Pain 9/19/06 . chapter 1 Ooh! Nice story with nice metaphores! :D (they weren't too hard to depict either). I really like metaphores heh :P So thanks for writing this!
Kaiba was in character too! And aww for the fluffy brother-relationship _ |
| Intense Innocence 9/19/06 . chapter 1 This is really good. i can see some hidden meaning behind it, Very creative!
is there going to be more? |
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