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NsShadowSerpent
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
I loved the LloydxColettexGenis thing you had going on in this story, it was very cute with the three of the together. Makes me jealous, wish I'd have thought of doing something like that~ Just really close friends, always being with one another. Such a warm story! I got fuzzies all over. The Zelos and Seles moment was great. Even though it seems as if the two don't really get along much, it's evident that they do care for one another in their own way. Very good story.
Formerly Melodious
2009-03-14 . chapter 1
Amazing!
Nips
2007-06-23 . chapter 1
DRAMA CD? I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN THIS DRAMA CD. O_O

Truthfully, I didn't read the notes at the beginning of the story, so when I got to the little lip exchange at the end, I was like, "WOAH OT3." Haha. Can't say I've read one of those yet. Even so, I really enjoyed it. I liked the ear showcase Genis had going on, though I didn't really know what to picture. What would a half-human, half-elf ear look like? I'm not sure if I would agree with Raine continuing to conceal her own ears, though I do agree that she has a more... conservative nature to her. It's apparently a good quality, though, if it's what allowed her prepubescent self to survive while burdened by a newborn baby.

I'm actually not sure what Raine would do. Would her self-preservation instincts, honed by about 10 years of watching out for only Genis and herself, win against her "I ain't takin' no ** from you" nature? It's an interesting question that I'm glad you brought up. It's a sign of a good writing when the story brings up an important issue unrelated to the basic premise (Winter Solstice gathering and the OT3).
LittleLinor
2007-04-13 . chapter 1
*gasp* there's a CD drama?

Well, I hadn't read that fic yet... and heck, I was missing something. It's truly awesome.
It's deep,t he characters are interestingly explored, it isn't clichéed... I enjoyed all of it a lot^^
*faves*
Kiki and Coco
2006-10-04 . chapter 1
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x3! HOMG ILU! This story made me feel so... warm. The moments were really, really, sweet. I 'aww-ed' out loud a couple of time. >w
Harmony283
2006-09-22 . chapter 1
Wow, I've got to say, this is good! I like the fact you made it ColetteXGenisXLloyd so no one's left out! I also liked the fact that they were traveling together! I wish that could happen in the game (where you can travel with more than one person, I mean).

Well, anyway, keep writing!
Shinneth
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
Really enjoyable... and yeah, holidays is kind of a tricky topic for ToS, isn't it? Lots of good ideas, but how to deliver them can be some work... I think you did a good job, anyway. Kept it nice and vague and it felt like a very fitting theme.

Very nice insight on the Lloyd/Colette/Genis OT3, by the way. :D Every bit as warm and fuzzy as it should be. Loved the Regal/Presea implications, especially her trying to convey a message by looking like Alicia. Sweet Zelos+Seles moments to cherish, and the subtle tension between Genis and Raine and the racism theme? Very fitting, and I agree with you on some points there.

Christmas came early for us~ very well done fic you have there!
SugarAddiction
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
ILOVEDITSO... much.

So CUTE! It is so in my fave's!
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