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biscotti29 2008-07-26 ch 18,	abuseLoved this story. And thanks for giving Sasuke the characterization you did - I really like the washroom scene between him and Naruto, with him knocking some sense into the blonde. Of course, I love everything else; in fact, I wasn't originally a fan of KakaSaku, so I'm glad that such quality stories exist to provide some quality persuasion :) Take care, biscotti29
MoonTearGirl 2008-07-22 ch 21, anon.	abusethat was amazing. Have to say, it's defintely one of the best written kakashi/sakura stories ever. it was so much fun reading!
Kat57 2008-07-17 ch 21,	abuseKawaii! My compliments on this story as well! You're such a talented writer! Toodles! ~Keitorin
Doesn't Matter 2008-07-15 ch 21, anon.	abuseAw Such a cute ending
lily 2008-07-15 ch 21, anon.	abuseThat was lovely. :') Perfect ending.
Doesn't Matter 2008-07-15 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow. I'm dumb... I didn't even notice that this story is complete... that's what I get fot reviewing half way through...
Doesn't Matter 2008-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't really like the pairing of Kakashi and Sakura, but I find myself reading this story nonstop just because it's so damn good... I love it -- I really do seeing as I usually won't give a second glance to any story whose pairings I'm not particulary fond of. Anyways... your style is absolutely brilliant :D (I especially like your portrayal of Kakashi) The plot is great too -- keeps me wanting more so keep those chapters coming
MistEternal 2008-07-14 ch 21,	abuseOoh, I loved this story! The plot was so unbelievably good and it was nice to see a happy ending. :) Plus I think the progression was realistic and it was good to see you didn't skip over any of the fine details as some authors would (i.e., their punishments and the effect and all that jibba jabba in between). I know this is a completed story so it'd probably be a hassle... But you do have some minor errors throughout most of the chapters where words will be wrong or misplaced... You could have a beta do a read through to catch these, though I can see that it'd be a bit tiresome. You also had Sakura noting in chapter 15 that Kakashi was probably being weird because it was the first time he has seen her apartment... but earlier in the story he took her home and took care of her on the night when she got drunk at the Hyuuga clan party. But it was really just the random misplaced word (like any instead of and or repeating words) here and there throughout the story that I could possibly criticize about this. They did nothing to retract from my enjoyment of the story because I do love this pairing (and haven't read much for them yet) and your plot/story really was wonderful. I just can't help but notice as a college student whose major -is- within the field of editing. And it could be something to look out for in the future even if you don't edit this particular story for error.
Summer-Sakura7 2008-07-14 ch 21,	abuseWow, this fanic was AMAZING! I read the whole thing without stopping. Seriously, great job! The best KakaSaku fanfic I've ever read.
Sadlittleillusionist 2008-07-13 ch 21, anon.	abuseOMG that was the most heatrwarming endearing story i have ever read not to mention that i was crying at the end i cant wait to start reading more of your awesome fanfics i was so touched by this one i hope there just as good thanx for the awesome read!
kelseykuroneko 2008-07-12 ch 21,	abuse:3 Awwe
e 2008-07-11 ch 21, anon.	abuseoh my god - you wouldn't believe my backside cried when kakashi told sakura good bye and left.. god i love you and ur stories! please write more!!
neverreviewed 2008-07-11 ch 21, anon.	abusewow. WOW
theGreyPebble 2008-07-10 ch 21,	abusegod damnit i lvoed reading it. and i'm a hardcore yaoi fan. but i loved this.
theGreyPebble 2008-07-10 ch 18,	abuseAHAHAHHA i was beginning to hate naruto. but this ending made me love him again. ... i know you didn't put ANY mention of sasunaru in this.. and i'm not saying you should (since you're done anyway) but just saying.. they have a cute relationship. sasuke is fun. their friendship is sweet, bordering on love? more like... brothers. forever. like that song the dood sang to simon cowell in american idol.

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