Option 2: Toko and Maieo.!

this was very good, i think toph and bummi should have gotten together tjough.

i realy wish you didnt add in secrrets of the water tribe though.

very good story in general!

'laughs' terra is an earthbender. i was bored & that episode was on, & ive seen it b4, but i was immiadiatly like, whoa! shes a fricken earthbender! toko! yay! i heart toko! the thing with teo being mais love slave was hilarious! but i cant imagine that ship. mais all, life sucks & then u die. & teos like, yay! stick that in ur juicebox & SUCK! alright, that was random...

Well, this is an old story of yours and hopefully your writing had improved. When I read this through, it's extremely humourous, and that's good, but I don't see much interaction between Toph and Zuko for them to hook up just yet. It was hard to follow (

This was ridiculous and poorly written and it was way to oriented around the erotic to be K. Any fanfiction that has the words 'nether regions' and involve a 14 year old boy bending a watery dildo for his 16 year old girlfriend should be labeled M.

Option 2 TOKA

I didn't start reading yet but is Terra and BB really in here? LOL.

Pretty odd story but I really liked it. I'm glad that even Bumi won that he didn't wed Toph. Herbalist is perfect mate for Bumi since the age span isn't greater than 100 years.

WOW! i so love it this is one of my fav stories not only beaucse it was great but i love the whole Toko bit.

great job never stop writing!11

You should write a sequal to Queen of Omashu.

Hey thanks for writing a Toko that was more than 2 chapps. I LOVED IT! but i think it needed a little more detail ya know? and next time make it all TOKO :) :) :) smiles and huggles

YAY!

Hi! Sory for not revewing on the other chapters, but I was reading them from a different acount/my brothers/;but they are all great.(Even if I do prefer tykka.But Ty laru is nice too.)

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funny and awsome, but the boy doesn't really need to GO to Bumi, just be his heir. oh well, poor zu-zu, sorounded by girls.

The idea of sneak peaks is very original. I LIKE IT!

NO! I luv Ty Lee, even though she's supposed to be evil! She's just so gosh darn nice!