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iluvtoko
2009-12-06 . chapter 12
Option 2: Toko and Maieo.!
scarlet luchia
2009-04-13 . chapter 16
this was very good, i think toph and bummi should have gotten together tjough.
i realy wish you didnt add in secrrets of the water tribe though.
very good story in general!
ViolotQ
2008-09-12 . chapter 15
'laughs' terra is an earthbender. i was bored & that episode was on, & ive seen it b4, but i was immiadiatly like, whoa! shes a fricken earthbender! toko! yay! i heart toko! the thing with teo being mais love slave was hilarious! but i cant imagine that ship. mais all, life sucks & then u die. & teos like, yay! stick that in ur juicebox & SUCK! alright, that was random...
MissMadameMina
2008-08-31 . chapter 15
Well, this is an old story of yours and hopefully your writing had improved. When I read this through, it's extremely humourous, and that's good, but I don't see much interaction between Toph and Zuko for them to hook up just yet. It was hard to follow =(
er……no.
2008-07-22 . chapter 14
This was ridiculous and poorly written and it was way to oriented around the erotic to be K+. Any fanfiction that has the words 'nether regions' and involve a 14 year old boy bending a watery ** for his 16 year old girlfriend should be labeled M.
TOKA FAN
2008-07-02 . chapter 12
Option 2 TOKA
RobinXRaven4ever
2007-07-26 . chapter 1
I didn't start reading yet but is Terra and BB really in here? LOL.
irohsteashoppegirls
2007-01-18 . chapter 15
Pretty odd story but I really liked it. I'm glad that even Bumi won that he didn't wed Toph. Herbalist is perfect mate for Bumi since the age span isn't greater than 100 years.
blindbandit29
2007-01-11 . chapter 1
WOW! i so love it this is one of my fav stories not only beaucse it was great but i love the whole Toko bit.
great job never stop writing!11
David
2007-01-06 . chapter 15
You should write a sequal to Queen of Omashu.
Cela
2006-12-29 . chapter 15
Hey thanks for writing a Toko that was more than 2 chapps. I LOVED IT! but i think it needed a little more detail ya know? and next time make it all TOKO :) :) :) smiles and huggles
YAY!
a simple teen
2006-11-24 . chapter 12
Hi! Sory for not revewing on the other chapters, but I was reading them from a different acount/my brothers/;but they are all great.(Even if I do prefer tykka.But Ty laru is nice too.)
=D
Wolf
2006-10-30 . chapter 15
funny and awsome, but the boy doesn't really need to GO to Bumi, just be his heir. oh well, poor zu-zu, sorounded by girls.
blueskiesahead
2006-10-20 . chapter 4
The idea of sneak peaks is very original. I LIKE IT!
blueskiesahead
2006-10-20 . chapter 2
NO! I luv Ty Lee, even though she's supposed to be evil! She's just so gosh darn nice!
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