 iluvtoko 2009-12-06 . chapter 12Option 2: Toko and Maieo.! |
 scarlet luchia 2009-04-13 . chapter 16this was very good, i think toph and bummi should have gotten together tjough.
i realy wish you didnt add in secrrets of the water tribe though.
very good story in general! |
 ViolotQ 2008-09-12 . chapter 15 'laughs' terra is an earthbender. i was bored & that episode was on, & ive seen it b4, but i was immiadiatly like, whoa! shes a fricken earthbender! toko! yay! i heart toko! the thing with teo being mais love slave was hilarious! but i cant imagine that ship. mais all, life sucks & then u die. & teos like, yay! stick that in ur juicebox & SUCK! alright, that was random... |
 MissMadameMina 2008-08-31 . chapter 15Well, this is an old story of yours and hopefully your writing had improved. When I read this through, it's extremely humourous, and that's good, but I don't see much interaction between Toph and Zuko for them to hook up just yet. It was hard to follow =( |
 er……no. 2008-07-22 . chapter 14 This was ridiculous and poorly written and it was way to oriented around the erotic to be K+. Any fanfiction that has the words 'nether regions' and involve a 14 year old boy bending a watery ** for his 16 year old girlfriend should be labeled M. |
 TOKA FAN 2008-07-02 . chapter 12 Option 2 TOKA |
 RobinXRaven4ever 2007-07-26 . chapter 1I didn't start reading yet but is Terra and BB really in here? LOL. |
 irohsteashoppegirls 2007-01-18 . chapter 15Pretty odd story but I really liked it. I'm glad that even Bumi won that he didn't wed Toph. Herbalist is perfect mate for Bumi since the age span isn't greater than 100 years. |
 blindbandit29 2007-01-11 . chapter 1WOW! i so love it this is one of my fav stories not only beaucse it was great but i love the whole Toko bit.
great job never stop writing!11 |
 David 2007-01-06 . chapter 15 You should write a sequal to Queen of Omashu. |
 Cela 2006-12-29 . chapter 15 Hey thanks for writing a Toko that was more than 2 chapps. I LOVED IT! but i think it needed a little more detail ya know? and next time make it all TOKO :) :) :) smiles and huggles
YAY! |
 a simple teen 2006-11-24 . chapter 12Hi! Sory for not revewing on the other chapters, but I was reading them from a different acount/my brothers/;but they are all great.(Even if I do prefer tykka.But Ty laru is nice too.)
=D |
 Wolf 2006-10-30 . chapter 15 funny and awsome, but the boy doesn't really need to GO to Bumi, just be his heir. oh well, poor zu-zu, sorounded by girls. |
 blueskiesahead 2006-10-20 . chapter 4The idea of sneak peaks is very original. I LIKE IT! |
 blueskiesahead 2006-10-20 . chapter 2NO! I luv Ty Lee, even though she's supposed to be evil! She's just so gosh darn nice! |