Oh wow. That's all I really have to say for this, is wow. I'm so excited and yet I am so scared. I thought Momoko was going to give everything away when they were in Tsunade's office recieving the headbands!! This is a breath taking story and I'M MAD!! FOUR REVIEWS?! You guys deserve more!! XD Poor Momoko though. Gai is after her. And Mitzuki...I'd kill to be in her shoes. >.> Wonder what's going through Kakashi's mind.

Anyways, I loved it to death.

wow.
im in awe! its brilliant.. im totally addicted and obsessed.
so... what happens next?
when does the next chapter come out?
O.O ill be waiting...

come on people! review!

x K x

Your story is really good! I like the plot line, very beleivable. It's sad, knowing that they're going to betray their new friends, no matter how much they don't want to.

As for constructive criticism: when using dialogue, you sometimes forget quotation marks at the beginning or end of the quote. Also, Mitzuki doesn't appear to have too much depth to her character. She always appears bubbley and happy, never really sad. Perhaps you could bring in more times where she acts happy, as is fitting with her character, but lets out an air of sadness or anger.

mwahaha, excellent, as always, keep it up, it's awesome

i like your story alot. what are the pairings? (if there are any)