 Jestana 2009-05-15 . chapter 17It's your fanart that made me curious about your fanfiction. This was a really cute story and I love how you characterized Jason. He's so very cute and I loved how matter-of-fact he was. I hope that never changed. I thought from early on that Richard and Kitty might make a good match. Though I hope it's honest-to-goodness love and not rebound. *grin* I cheered at every mention of Bruce Wayne. I've always loved Batman. I hope your other Supes fic includes more of him. Anyway, thank you very much for such a wonderful fic. |
 Makatoey 2008-11-12 . chapter 3 Oh god, she acts all jealous and bitchy and she already has a fiance?
** women, double standards I tell you. If it's a chick, sure she can be all angsty, but if it's a guy you want to cut off his balls. God...
Sorry, had to peek at the next chapter.
I'm done now. |
 Makatoey 2008-11-12 . chapter 2 It's a well written fic and all, but I can most definately tell this is written by a woman.
Making a big deal about a guy entertaining ideas with women etc, and really, honestly, your Superman is just another chick flick character.
So charming, boyishly naive at times, and feels empathy at the right times with his slips being just enough to even him out some.
Can't really stand the too-nice male, the PMSing woman who gives said due a hard time and the girls laugh at the dudes expense.
Leave a warning, for females and queers only. |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 7Lois is hilarious, love the fantasies. I love the end. |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 6OMG. That was a shocking ending. I hate Lex. I love the progress Clark and Lois are having. Good chapter! |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 5Such a cute chapter. I love the way it ends, suspense! |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 4OMG. The conversation with Martha was a little weird. She wouldn't be discussing Clark's 'skills' in the bedroom. And I can't see Lois being a virgin. |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 3Corn Capitol! Great chapter! I can't wait until Clark rediscovers his feelings! |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 2Ha! That is so funny! I love how obvious it is for Jason! |
 SassyAni 2008-08-10 . chapter 1Cute and silly! I love it, and now Lois knows! |
 sakura1011 2008-02-29 . chapter 15OMG!! |
 DarthReign 2008-01-09 . chapter 17Brilliant story! I loved Richard's sacrifice, and how he did it. And I appreciate the fact you included the short Author's Notes/Epilogue too. |
 rhapsody-child-of-the-sky 2008-01-01 . chapter 17this was amazing i really love it |
 Peace Like a River 2007-12-21 . chapter 17I liked this fic. Parts of it felt a little bit 'off', Jason in particular, but it still made for a pretty good read. Great ending, too. God, Clark and Lois were so pathetically stubborn. Good thing Richard was able to work things out. :-) And as for pairing him and Kitty? Sounds pretty good to me. |
 aforgottenwish 2007-11-09 . chapter 7Alright, just to prove to you that I'm not a terrible person, and because I also occasionally suffer from the lack of feedback blues, I'm going to comment.
I really like this fic. I've read another superman-amnesia fic, and wasn't at all pleased with it, so I didn't have high expectations when I started reading, but I'm now having a good time and convinced that the amnesia plot bunny can work!
I've been loving Clark's childlike facination; he's amused by the small things and the big things, and it's super cute.
I like how Lois is feeling guilty about how she treated Clark. She wasn't horrible to him... just dismissive and in a lot of fics, she kind of dismisses her behaviour towards him, forgives herself, eventually forgives him, and lives happily ever after.
Anyhow, good job, and back to reading! |