Whoa, the daughter thing was unexpected. But I still want to see more. Soon please?

And now, on to chapter 3! Not yet, you say? Eh. This was nice, but I think if I were helen I'd smack Gambit upside the head. I did notice one small typo, though. Rogue, not Rouge. aside from that, very nice, and I'm looking forward to more of this! :) Rachel

This doesn't suck! I think it's good!

Hey! It doesn't suck! I've known people who've been "writing" for years and still couldn't write like this. Sure, it needs polishing, but for a first time, this is really good! :)

not bad. but expand a bit more on the "mystery girl" part. her powers and stuff. just so that shes more interesting. keep working on this story though!

That was good. Hmmm...You wouldn't happen to represent "the girl he left behind" would you? A lot of authors put a bit of themselves in their stories. I can see some of that here.

No it didn't suck. I liked it! Maybe you could write another as a sequal?

hey this is interesting.hope you intro Rogue soon.

I like it. Remy and Ororo (Jubillation and Logan) are my Favorite characters. Plaese continue with this story I thik this character.

OMG..this was different but at the same time really really good...can't wait 2 see more...

i like it its good, one thing though and you might kno this already but im such a gambit fan i have to taddle tale on most mistakes, but not all. It was Julien Beaudreux and remy killed him in a duel with sowrds when Julien challenged him after his wedding to Belle, then Jean-luc had to kick him out. Other than that i liked it. But i have to warn you I am a rouge hater i can't stand the she doesnot deserve Remy, the Movie Rouge hasn't met him yet but shes young and has a better disposition, and the new cartoon one well i haven't made my mind up about her yet. Though i wish i had more gambit they actually canceled is series, sorry i was ranting there for a sec. But you would be in my favor if rouge got knocked down a few pegs by remy and a new girlfriend. I liked the story, I really did can't wait to see more. Good luck :)

Well there still are kinks, this story doesn't suck! It has a great beginning and I look foward to seeing more in the future. Keep writing!

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