Very interesting. Like the combo I love both of these shows. I can see Jarod as an immortal. And Mac would be the perfect teacher for him.

I like it so far. Don't think that Duncan would do that to Jarod when he was sparring. He's never done that before when he sparred with other immortals.

Hi that was a very good story.

Interesting. Do you keep writing on all your crossovers, or do you get bored or frustrated and give up?

grins... must have been one very good book ^_^ continue

Still lovin' it! Nicely done, great reveal, fantastic characterizations. Can't wait for more.

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Ooh, very nice. I love this crossover, it seems a natural, and you're doing a great job with it. I hope you write more, tell us who the Centre's Immortal is.

^_^ continue

I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes

what an interesting view the two men have of eachother. . .

Wow, great story. Nicely done on the descriptions of both characters, and how they each see the other. Well done!

Nice start :-D Hope to read more soon!

You've got a great start here. Nicely done with the characters. I'm looking forward to more.

Great start, hope to read more.