Lovely story!

You really nailed Hitsugaya's character and I enjoyed the unexpectedness of the kiss. Matsumoto was just like an evil older sister intent on provoking a love-struck younger brother. Nicely done.

omagod! i love this story! matsumoto was funny. "boobs off the desk" LOL

lol, matsumoto is hilarious
great story

AW that was cute. Surprised Hitsugaya is funny. So is embarrassed Hitsugaya. And so is perverted Hitsugaya, ahaha. Very cute story!

LMFAO, simply perfect :)

HOW CUTE! Anyway, Momo's birthday is in june just to let you know! HEHHEHEHEHEHEEHHEHEE! (June the third)!

Love,
Momo-chan^^~

lol... This was one of the best HitsuHina stories I've ever read. I love the way you made Hinamori not exactly the way she was before the Betrayl, but still in character. :)

Aww. That was cute =]

The "boobs off the desk" was the greatest part.

Awesome! I loved the conversations with Hyourinmaru and I really loved Hitsugaya's internal monologue. Great job!

LOL!
i simply LOVE your writing style! you're terribly hilarious! just a riot!

the story was super fabulous! i loved Toshiro, i loved Hyourinmaru, but i loved Rangiku the most. =D
everything about the story rocked!
fabulous, darlin!

I loved this- especially the epilogue, it was so funny, and Hyorinmaru was great too.

Fantastic Job.

I loved it! The story was soo awesome and your style of writing! Just one thing that I'm confused about... I thought Hinamori's birthday was June the third... oh, well. Keep up the awesome work!

Col! Hitsugaya's cho cute! I love him and lil Hinamori and Matsumoto too!! LOVELY FICCIE!

i didn't see that there was another chapter until i scrolled down..very funny..loved it