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Sarafly
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseYou know what! I agree with you. CSI for me is Sara and Grissom.Those few moments they share with us are the reason why I watch CSI.But they are gone now. I miss them so very much.
You are an excellent writer.Thanks
jenstog
2007-10-19
ch 1,
abusejust read this story- it's freakin wonderful!
The Smoose
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseI just read the A/N at the bottom of this and burst into tears! Lovely fic though!
taramis
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseLovely story...but my naughty mind went elsewhere at the WD-40 bit. I felt oddly sheepish after reading the ending!

:D

~taramis
Rumidha
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was a lovely, lovely little story, and your kiss descriptions were utterly gorgeous. But when I read your A/N, I busted up laughing.

"A/N: You know, I have to say I don't much give a rat's behind about autopsies. But I do love Grissom and Sara. So, here's to Season 7—I hope we're as happy at the end of this season as we were at the end of last!"

As happy at the end of this season as we were at the end of last? HAHAHAHA! =P
keepix
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseHi!
Well, i regret to not understand english perfectly,actually i'm french, but i tried to.And omg,it is very good, so sweet, sometimes funny,ironic and very pleasant to read...
i liked the way you put their relationship and their missed kisses

well,thX a lot
contrarymotion
2006-12-21
ch 1,
abuseaw.

'nuff said.
Elialys
2006-11-20
ch 1,
abuseOkay, here we go!!
Well, no worries, I'm just doing a little introduction here, it's just something I do from time to time ^^
Okay, so, it's 1h15 am here in France, and knowing myself, and the size of the review-soon-to-be, I will have to do at College with only 4h30 of sleep, but I'm fine really ^^ I just have to ask a question to someone, why, to Grissom's guardian angel, this will do it : WHY? WHY do I have to ALWAYS read holly damn awesome fics after midnight? (yes yes, here was a compliment, you saw it? =D) Okay, I'm just...apologizing now, because I'm actually exausted and all happy in my GSR heart after this (late) reading section (oh another one!! Okay, I shut my mouth...soon^^)
First, I just wanted to reread 'Epithelials'cause this fic is Gorgeous, and seriously, I just rewatched 'Committed' earlier tonight, and reading it just after...*HEAVY SIGH* it was even better than the first time, and I really hated myself for the tiny review I wrote to you for it last time, because, when I love a story, I usually do HUGE review. Unless I'm speakless at the end of the fic...Well okay, I remember now, I was all crying-moody (sorry if I use words that are not english, I try hard not to write in french ^^) so, little review. I would love to do a big one for it now, but I think this review is for 'Do Over', isn't it? Maybe I should do this one before, the other(s), later this week =D

So, the story!! (At last, sorry if you fell asleep lol)
It was simply and truly AWESOME! When I saw it was a 'Romance' one, I thought it would be a fluffy one (no offense, I LOVE fluffy fic ^^) But it's so more than that. Really, maybe I'm jocking a lot (it's because I'm tired) but when I speak about amazing story, I'm all serious, I do my 'I'm-the-boss-end-of-discussion' tone, just like Grissom (I so love the way you descripe their looks and glance, you made me laugh!!). So yeah, it was so in character, romantic, YES, but so believable, and so good for the GSR shippers!!
I adore your flash-back to when they were young and...so hot. Yes, I know they're still very hot, but 'first-metting' stories always turn me on (uh, I'm not THAT turned on, I'm not very clear LMAO). Well, I love this kind of story, having it in you fic was absolutely GREAT, I so wanted them to kiss!
Then, you did a switch (I think this is the word) after 'Grave Danger', an incredible thing, that put them both back to that moment, using Sara's curling hair as a link. The word 'ADORE' is to weak to describe how much I loved the 'box' thing about the memories. Really, everything felt so right. They are such in character.
Of course, I adore the last part. You really made me laugh, with Sara's comments. And the whole part with the KISSES?! Gah, you gave me damn big butterflies in my stomach with those, and, don't tell anyone, I was crying at the end *run far away from the keyboard. Then come back 'cause I still have to send this to you* Actually, I really am not ashame of my tears, I love to cry reading a story, because it means it's really good, and I know the author is always thrilled. Well maybe you're not, cause you're surely too scared of me now ^^ Anyway, I'm almost done =D
Did I tell you that this story too was Gorgous? Awesome and perfect. I'm in love with your writing, I put you to my alert list, fav list, bref, every list that can tell me when you're writing more! And I still have two stories from you to read YEAHH. Ah, and just so you know, I'm going to do huge scaring review to you everytime now, so let me know if you don't like it, I'll not go to bed at 1h45 am next time that way . But if it's okay, I can stay awake until 2, no worries ^^ ^^
God, I think my bed's really calling me. I'm coming! *flee*
BISOUS!!
*Elialys*

PS : I'm ** at fanfiction net 'cause the alert are down again, so you won't see it :'(
csmit99
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abusethis was great :)
Quill-32
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abuseHee! This was fun. I like how he gets annoyed at her straightened hair.
CrazyMaritimer
2006-09-27
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was really good. Those kissing scenes were the best! Very nice job!
StarlaMarie
2006-09-26
ch 1,
abuseI love your fic! This one...well there are just no words :o)
x.WitheredRose.x
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuseI adored this fic! Thankyou so much! I especially loved this part: "It's just …in my private life...here...I always thought it would be so hard to find the love of my life. So hard to recognize that one person who I'd love forever. But that was the easiest part. The difficulty comes from not being given license to touch him, or hold him, or even speak to him in much more than a professional capacity." I've thought of Grissom and Sara before as the love of each other's lives but it's never properly crossed my mind. There is something so.. beautiful about those words. And now I'm going all sappy! Thanks for the story, great job!
odeepblue
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuseyes i hope so too ;)

i loved your fic, very sweet ;)
JesSickUh
2006-09-21
ch 1,
abuseThe kissing scenes were so sweet. Here's to season 7!
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