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Reviews for: Close Your Eyes and Pretend
punkyvb
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
good job this is good
Stargirlrox
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
I feel sorry for her. Aang better give her those gifts soon, before she thinks he doesn't love her! And that wouldn't be good,
would it?
timisnotmyname
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
awws...

so sad!!

im faving this, btw.
C.Lovebug
2007-10-11 . chapter 1
ok,i read this one-shot twice and it is amazing.I'm really disappointed that you're not continuing "No one else" i really liked that story and i'm hoping that one day inspiration will hit you and you'll write more.
Son of John
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Oh...wow!! You have no idea how badly I wanted to cry after reading this! It takes more than just an average joe to write something that bring out the pain, desires, and sadness of a yearning heart.

Trust me, I know what that sensation feels like and you captured it almost perfectly!! Even the thought that the girl Aang was destined to be with was not her fit in wonderfully.

It is such a shame you can't be a more active author. You would most definitely be one of the most popular out there! I hope you can update 'No One Else' soon, or even just another random Avatar or any fanfiction! I'll read it without a moment's doubt.
chocolatecoveredbananacheese
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Sorry... but didn't really like this one. I liked other stories from you though. :)
Neko-O
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Hey!! and what happen whit ''No One Else''?? ;O;!
Youu evil! T_T plz update it!! plz plz plz!
I still waiting...! .0.!
~Bye! ;O;!
SnakeEyes16
2006-10-04 . chapter 1
Wow, Katara just doesn't trust to hope does she? This was really good, kinda like a spoiler for the upcomming installment! Good luck with school Jini, I can hardly wait to find out how this goes!

Always watching,
~SnakeEyes
Liselle129
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
That was really good. Kind of reminded me of my oneshot Will You Remember. She is awfully clueless, isn't she? That's kind of a weird thing about the show. It's supposed to be the guy that doesn't get it. I've managed to chalk it up to the fact that there hadn't really been any men in her village for a couple of years, so she didn't learn how to read them.
frozenheat
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
Ah Katara, we're not the brightest one of the planet are we? Great fic to go with No One Else, very interesting to see Katara side of things. Once again fantastically written you never cease to amaze me!!

Can't wait for the next one-shot and the final chapter on No One Else!!
BuzzieBug
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
WOW!! I luv your story! You are awosome at details (i really need to work on putting more detail in my story, it's called Drifting Apart) Please write more, or i will DIE!
icefire108
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh poor Katara...she's clueless isn't she? Oh well, she'll get it eventually. I did enjoy your story. Hope you've got more to submit!
Yami Marik
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
Very Nice. I think you are naturally gifted at this. Can't wait to see the end of NOE. However, this whets my appetite for your stories. FOR NOW!
Brisy
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
I hope you update the other fic, this was really well-done. I liked it =).
Steven
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
Good stuff, ish the first to review yay. Lovethe portrayal of emotions and stuff. Great sort of side story to no one else.
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