Nice.

twas good, if it only it were slightly more grapic! D good job tho! had never really thought of this pairing...

Hee. You wrote slash. Hee.

Too busy laughing to leave anything very coherent.

The paragraph breaks killed me. And Kaddar deserves to join the Conte family just for being able to hold his own with Jon and Thayet.

In conclusion: Go Roald!

Imo

AH! Thata's all I could thin when I read that. I LOVED IT! Oh my... I just.. oh.. I LOVED IT! Ok I'm done.

Bram

oh fuck. This is the most messed up fic I've read since the Richard II/Bolingbroke one on shaksper_random over at lj. In a good way, of course.

Kaddar is probably drunk too, isn't he?

Anyway, great story.