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that lame loser
2007-10-01
ch 14,
abusewhile it was well writen
it was evil EVIl
that should never happen to the gang
how could you write such things
fullyxalive
2007-08-17
ch 14,
abuseHoly.
**.
**.
Michelle.

-dies- MY LOVE IS GONE!

Well, I liked it anyway.

=]
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 14,
abuse"And then there were none..." =( That was... one of the best stories I've ever read... wow. Awesome Job.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 13,
abuseGah. -throws up from image.- That was... -barfs again.- So...visual... and excellent. But mostly visual...
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 12,
abuseOh my god. Oh...my... -feels sick.- -dismisses thought of dessert-
-feels like throwing up- I can see that. It's all up to Two-Bit. I need to read the next chapter. Poor Johnny,Soda, Pony and Dally!
It IS like and then there were none
'Two little Indian Boys sitting in the sun,
One got frizzled up and then there was one.

One little Indian Boy left all alone,
He went and hanged himself /And then there were none/!" -scurries to next chapter-
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 11,
abuseYes there is... -hurries to next chapter.-
((Yes. Love it as usual!!))
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 10,
abuse-can see her friend who's a Ponyboy fan attack Johnny.- -holds her back- No! Stop!
-shudder- Once again, so much emotion, I love it.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 9,
abuseNo! He's got it all wrong! You're supposed to read when Jesus took out demons from Human's and stuff! From the BIBLE! Geesh.
Brother: -rolls eyes- You can see she's into this.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 8,
abuseDUDE! I just realized... it's like... "And then there were none" with The Outsiders!
Poor Soda and Pony! Of course, Poor Johnny! -hands twitch to bible again.-
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 7,
abuseHahaha! Busted Bob! -shakes fist- -then brings out Bible- EXCORSISUM(sp?) TIME!
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 6,
abuseAtta boy, Pony! Play Sherlock! Discover the scumbag controlling poor ol' Johnny!
It was excellent, don't worry.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 5,
abuseAw, your writing is really emotional! Don't pay attention to those idiots. I've had that before, but I just ignored it.
I'm here to talk if you need it.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 4,
abuseHell yeah he's a physco! A stupid, idiotic...
-stops- Poor Steve. And Johnny. =(
As usual, love this.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 3,
abusePoor Pony, Poor Johnny... -must stop listening to Cell Block Tango- I really like this.
ChristmasShoes
2007-06-20
ch 2,
abuseHOLY CRAP. -cowers-
That got me scared.
And I'm listening to "Cell Block Tango"
Oh My God, that helps NOTHING. -is shivering-
Good Job...lot's of emotion...
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