soo cute.. really cute... totally cute! Hehehehehehehe... love it!! ^^

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wohoho! great story ^_^

Aw, so cute ^^

-loves you- wonderful story -nods- it was sweet but a bit fast. oh well, it's a one-shot so. but I loved it anyway, don't get me wrong -grins- thanks for writing! :)

haha that was cute!

Heheh, yeah summer fun, huh? Lol, nice job. I'll be watching for any other FMA fics you do! Keep writing =)

♥Gabunny♥

Whe whe fun!
Edo: Urk
Peep: Don't worry. We won't know bout your 'relationship' with Winry till the next chapters containing her! D:
Edo: Oh well.
Peep: Yep. *crestfallen*

Jya ne
Peepmeow

hehe
is this the end end no more
hehe well was ok:0 would have been better if longer

[ IMAO ] lol xD -- winry, you little minx -- i loved it

Hehe, action for Edo-kun.

Cute story, there were a couple errors, like...
", but sometimes I feel like he is pushing myself too much to please not only himself for missing a body all of those years "

I think you meant to put "he is pushing 'himself'"

And you spelt 'butterflies' 'butter flies'

Nothing to really fret over, just keep an eye on the little things. ^^ No one's perfect, and this story was great just the same.

-Eve Nightingale

Did I ever tell you how much I luff you, big sisseh? ^^

Hm, it was pretty good, altho you might add a bit more descriptions and details - makes characters feel more 'alive' :P. But it was pretty good no doubt. (oh, and why the M rating? This barely reaches T, if even that much)

This is pretty good. Mainly I think you need to flesh it out more. You just kind of casually drop things in there (such as Paninya staying with them) that could use some more elaboration. Also is Al his real age or not? Is he a kid like in the anime or is he his true age?

This has lots of potential, I think you just need to lengthen it and flesh it out more.