I thought that was good! I have always believed in Elliot and Olivia as a couple good first try!

That was great. I love the ending... it was very realistic. I wish that would've happened in the real thing ; )

I liked this, just like all your stories that I've read so far. Great job!

It was really enjoyable and I agree with you, this is how it should have happen in that ep. Now if only we can convince the dumbass prick that calls himself the producer, Dick Wolf to read this and everything would be perfect.

please tell me you are going to wrtie more to this story because i think its gettin good, right when you are gettin elliote and olivia to talk about what they are thinking!

Hi. You rock. Your story rocks (even though it's EO!). I love you. You made my day. Bye.

OMG! i LOVED it! i want another chapter, that was gorgeous! good job! :D

It was just fine Kay. I like that you did not make Elliot all bitter and angry at her. I hope it plays out like that on the show. I don't want them to be angry with each other anymore. Good job. I always look forward to reading your stories.

I love it! It was a great idea! So cute!

Oh, go Kay, go go go Kay!

hehe It'd be awesome if this is what would happen...well anything would as long as Elliot and Olivia kiss :P

Beautiful one-shot, Kay! I loved it... Can't wait to see the day when Liv comes back.. you captured it so well :) -Kate

AW! I loved it! That is sso what should happen when Liv gets back. C'mon, let's go kidnap the writers and make it happen!

Please Kay, keep going! I love it! Now we gotta hope it happens this way! hee hee! :)

E&O forever!

SVU forever!

I honestly enjoyed that. Great job! I think it was perfect.