This is good

'Athrun was still confused. "What's so special about a shield with a snake woman on it to Cagalli…?"

"—and it was called the Aegis." She waved at Athrun after checking her watch. "Well I have to go now. See you, Mr. Dino." Erica then began walking away.

The Aegis…'

why would this be important? was it the name of her mother or a stepmother of your story?

Aw that was a really cool story.

I liked the idea and the fact that unknown to Athrun Cagalli had gotten all those tattoos.

Aw is Athrun mad at Cagalli for getting that tattoo or rather those tattoos. He seems kinda really possessive of her in that scene. It was cute but really funny because of all the surprise that was evident in his voice.

I liked the fact that each of Cagalli's tattoos represented something special to her. It was sweet.

And the fact that Athrun was stumped on her last tattoo was cute because she seemed embarrassed to tell him what it represented to her. Aw cute.

The story is dang sweet.

The tattoos & symbolism were very creative ] The Aegis P Loved it

Nice...I hope you write more! (I want a tattoo!)

Maybe the ending was weak (I didn’t really think so), but it was a good finish, where you could actually distinguish it. Nice research done (did you?), some good ideas used to represent a bit of Cagalli’s character. Symbolism, I guess it is. Creative.

I say, this story is cute! I love it. Keep up the good work!

Uhh it was so cute!

O...M...G! That was genius!

I like the idea of the story... the tatoos and all.

The ending has a really nice meaning to it too...

So... may I ask, WHEN was it that Cagalli decided to have that tatoo?

nice story...i think it was pretty interesting. good job.

(big grin)

Aw so sweet! Perhaps Athrun should get a tattoo of a amber/sunset/kagari flower?