aw
that was a good story
:)

:) verry well done!

i feel rele bad for Ray tho...

aw poor Ray...
but
TalaxKai is way better than TalaxRay
XD XD XD

XD XD XD
i like your story

and ur writing- u have talent :)

wow. this is really hot. I like that even though Tala is Uke he likes to be in control. Of you just wait till kai has you tala. hehehehhe.

O^_^O So not dissapointed! You are an AMAZING writter!! I hope to see more like this becuase talents like ur shouldnt be wasted! I'm so envious!! Kudos mate!! I seriously loved this so much and I love how you tied everything together in a nice, neat package and didnt leave anyloose ends! WICKED story! ^_^

Poor tala... Poor Ray ... Poor Kai... =S Oh wow, what a mix-up! Last chapter comming up! ^_^ Can't wait!!

Aw Poor Tala. He's usually so cocky and confident. I hope he feels better soon!
Still loving it! Can't wait to read the rest... even tho they're so long! XD lol.

I LOVE THIS! O^_^O If i didn't know better, i'd swear it was a real story and not just a fan fic! I can't wait to read the rest! If it's even half as goos as this, I know I'll love it!! Poor Ray tho... =( I know this is a TalaXKai fic, but I think the story would be nearly as good if it was TalaXRei ... hmm... well no, maybe not.. XD .. anyways LOVE IT!

i love this story lol
awesome lemons too! ^-^

AhawT.T What a all lovely-dovely ending that was

.. o_o cliffhanger...*pokes the cliffhanger*.. I'm such a lucky bastard to have the next chapters already up>w<

HAHA

I liked it but just one thing Raul isn't Brazillian, but he could be if he was tanner [its hot here in Brazil] just saying, but if it wa your idea never mind ^_^ great story

OMG that was the best story i have read in my life! that was great! wow. i almost cried at some parts. you did exactly what you needed to! youra really good writer and should keep it up.

love always
ktbr