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thebestestfriendsforever
2009-10-16 . chapter 24
is there going to more to this story.
raka
2009-05-04 . chapter 25
Such a great story... Too bad you have abondoned it...
Three cheers for the author...
And where is the ending summery... Nothing's there in your profile...
Hope you can actually take it back up and start updating again... I especially love the History scenes so much...
raka
2009-05-04 . chapter 11
Nice story till now... I don't know if you'll read this... But you shouldn't have removed the summary of the story... So far it was good... I only read this story seeing the no.of reviews... Anyway, thanks for actually spending your allowance for uploading this chapter...
I award you my personal "Services to HP Fandom" :D
Anyway, enjoy life...
Insanity at its Fullest
2009-02-08 . chapter 12
Drunken hippogriffs, indeed.
puregarnet
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Nice.
Sakura Reservoir Chronicles
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Nice.
Blackdex
2008-12-28 . chapter 13
not worth it, as much of a thrill as that comment might be, its not worth giving up the secret. ciao
Allie-grrl4
2008-08-28 . chapter 25
update soon
SweatDrop
2008-08-12 . chapter 25
Aww, this is so ** amazing though!! Dun stop!! Please!! O_O!! -puppy dog eyes-
I haven't read something so good in 3 years!! But I agree that it is a little OC and also a little too much on Draco in the end AND not enough Dumbledor and Chris bashings.
Hope you do at least finish this coz it's ** AMAZING!
Darkest Melody
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
Just in case you decide to finish this one day in the far off future ^_^
Mr.unpredictable
2008-07-17 . chapter 19
honestly..

u made harry hate chris because chris took credit for harry's actions..

now everybody else and their grandmother is taking credit for his actions, chris, draco and all.. kinda stupid of him.. dont u think..

ultimately he's still a loser..
jabarber69
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Interesting story, too bad its discontinued!
Jamr
2008-07-10 . chapter 17
Ok bored now ...new harry was cool but same old story line everybodys read 10 times
livvie333
2008-07-09 . chapter 25
If anyone decides to adopt this story, please drop me a PM. :)
Also maybe you could tell me how this story would have ended? Since the summary's gone and all...
It was a great story, but did start to dwindle at the end- easy to tell you were getting a bit bored with it. You're a great writer (How did you manage to fail your English final?!) and I hope you start another long story again, whether HP or ATLA.
That is all.
-Livvie Salazar
Jesse McGee
2008-07-07 . chapter 9
Another thing.
Americans spell the shorten form of mother "mom", the British spell it "mum". So that means when Chris run away to his mother like a little brawling baby not yet out of diapers, he would be crying for "mummy", not "mommy".
And don't claim that, because you are for America (I'm assuming) that it gives you the right to spell it the American way. No, it doesn't. You are writing about British boy at a British school. And it's pretty likely that a British boy wouldn't spell it that way. So be faithful to the book (or movie, if that's what you're writing it from) and spell it right.
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