loosing control - again typos. You don't "loose" control you "lose" control. Spell check doesn't pick this up because the word loose is spelled correctly.

Half six - don't you mean half past ten? Checking for typos is very important. It's crucial to the story.

Firstly, big squee for a new 4400 writer! :D Nice start to the fic and good writing. Can't wait to see what it is that Matthew was setting up.

Awesome. I've been hoping a new Shawn centric fic would pop up. I'm excited to see where this is heading.