 hsmprincess 2007-10-24 . chapter 6loved it so much u need to update soon |
 who101710ohw 2007-10-17 . chapter 6who sent the letter ? |
 Isabella120 2007-10-17 . chapter 6update! |
 Celebrytie Aris Channas 2007-10-16 . chapter 6It was a little confusing, but I liked it! |
 Lovegoddess567 2007-10-16 . chapter 6I like it update |
 RevesCasses 2007-10-16 . chapter 4You know, based on the review's you've gotten from other people, I agree with iheartdraco4lyf and Jane Marie. Draco's very ooc and your grammatical errors are pretty bad. Do you need help? I could help you if you want. I could like help u read your story and edit the errors before you post the story. Is it ok with you? I'm having my holiday so i'm prettymuch free. Love the pairing and plot! ^-^ |
 RevesCasses 2007-10-16 . chapter 3Ermm, sorry to say but you left out a lot of words and Hermione's middle name is Jean not Jane. I suggest you look through your story to correct the errors. I like the plot of your story so I'll keep going.^-^ |
 Isabella120 2007-10-10 . chapter 5update soon your story is amazing! |
 Yemi Hikari 2007-10-09 . chapter 2OoC to an extreeme.
And Hermione would NOT know what Dramione meens or that it even exists. |
 Yemi Hikari 2007-10-09 . chapter 1Well, I do see her being depressed after the war. |
 Celebrytie Aris Channas 2007-10-09 . chapter 5Please keep this story going. I love it! |
 hsmprincess 2007-10-09 . chapter 5i loved it please update |
 who101710ohw 2007-10-07 . chapter 4i love the story ! |
 Jane Marie 2006-11-22 . chapter 3Okay...well, this is a little OOC, and the grammar is rather bad. It does have potential though, if you go by the thought that Draco changed dramatically over the war and stuff.
Do you want a beta reader? You rather need one, and I'd be more then happy to help you out. |
 iheartdraco4lyf 2006-09-22 . chapter 2I've haven't even gotten through half of this chapter when I decided that this is desperately occ. Draco would NEVER, ask Hermione, completely out of the blue, what instrument he played. Honestly, this fanfic reads like a parody. Character progression, and letting the reader adjust to the flow of the story is key. Keep in mind, this is just critical criticism, I'm not an evil ** out to get you.
Work hard to improve. |