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hsmprincess
2007-10-24 . chapter 6
loved it so much u need to update soon
who101710ohw
2007-10-17 . chapter 6
who sent the letter ?
Isabella120
2007-10-17 . chapter 6
update!
Celebrytie Aris Channas
2007-10-16 . chapter 6
It was a little confusing, but I liked it!
Lovegoddess567
2007-10-16 . chapter 6
I like it update
RevesCasses
2007-10-16 . chapter 4
You know, based on the review's you've gotten from other people, I agree with iheartdraco4lyf and Jane Marie. Draco's very ooc and your grammatical errors are pretty bad. Do you need help? I could help you if you want. I could like help u read your story and edit the errors before you post the story. Is it ok with you? I'm having my holiday so i'm prettymuch free. Love the pairing and plot! ^-^
RevesCasses
2007-10-16 . chapter 3
Ermm, sorry to say but you left out a lot of words and Hermione's middle name is Jean not Jane. I suggest you look through your story to correct the errors. I like the plot of your story so I'll keep going.^-^
Isabella120
2007-10-10 . chapter 5
update soon your story is amazing!
Yemi Hikari
2007-10-09 . chapter 2
OoC to an extreeme.

And Hermione would NOT know what Dramione meens or that it even exists.
Yemi Hikari
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
Well, I do see her being depressed after the war.
Celebrytie Aris Channas
2007-10-09 . chapter 5
Please keep this story going. I love it!
hsmprincess
2007-10-09 . chapter 5
i loved it please update
who101710ohw
2007-10-07 . chapter 4
i love the story !
Jane Marie
2006-11-22 . chapter 3
Okay...well, this is a little OOC, and the grammar is rather bad. It does have potential though, if you go by the thought that Draco changed dramatically over the war and stuff.

Do you want a beta reader? You rather need one, and I'd be more then happy to help you out.
iheartdraco4lyf
2006-09-22 . chapter 2
I've haven't even gotten through half of this chapter when I decided that this is desperately occ. Draco would NEVER, ask Hermione, completely out of the blue, what instrument he played. Honestly, this fanfic reads like a parody. Character progression, and letting the reader adjust to the flow of the story is key. Keep in mind, this is just critical criticism, I'm not an evil ** out to get you.

Work hard to improve.
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