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| Protector of Canon2 2007-03-23 ch 2, | abuseMabey he should talk to Rouge. When she gets back, I mean. Hasen't she already done this. |
| Protector of Canon2 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuse...Oh. So that's the catch. Well, I guess he's not gonna be teaching unless he can get this under control. And about Warren? Please bring him back. He's one of my favorite characters. Mabey you could have Forge build a body for Chamber and then they can be separated? And mebey I should read the next chapter... which I will do right now. Update! |
| Jayness 2007-02-08 ch 2, | abuseWow I'm so happy the series are all being updated! i just checked today and was pleasantly surprised! GOOD WORK! I love deadpool-he's one of those crazy characters you can have say or do whatever...plus its deadpool! He just rocks. The class descriptions were awesome...i especially liked jubes methods! Jon's inner struggle was well portrayed and emma has a target sign...excellent chapter! |
| El Varon 2007-01-29 ch 2, | abuseWow . . . so many things happening in such a short amount of time. . . . Werewolf -or werecat?- Deadpool, and whatnot. Anyways, excellent chapter. |
| xoXOCutieOXox 2007-01-27 ch 2, | abuseOMG! I can't wait to read more! Deadpool, Hank being a werewolf, new creepy girl...it's almost too much to bear! My heart's about to burst! lol by the way I'm totally loving the friendship between Jubes and Jono. I've always thought they really complimented each other well, w/ him being all angsty and her being all smiley-sunshine. Update soon and keep up the great work! |
| B Oots 2006-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, why Hank attacked Jubilee and doesn't remember it? |
| Sparkling potato chips 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice intro first chapter thinger...uh yeah... Nice little twist with the beast. You totally had me convinced it was Sabertooth. You threw me off even more when you actually had Beast's absence acknowledged and dismissed easily. Well it worked on me I was like, "ugh he's with Trish whatever moving on!" So good job on that! Bobby turning down any girl is kind of hard to believe when you think of his past dating record...But then I suppose Jubilee is young. I've often wondered if she has a secondary mutation marvel gave her which instead of aging, she deages and restarts. You know like once she reaches 16 the X gene goes "oh NO!" and she's magically 13 again! Who knows, besides they've had stranger. Although it is unfair seeing as how even Ilyana got to grow older. Even if it was a F#@$ up accelerated way. Totally off topic! Now I haven't read anything before this fic so I don't know what's up with the relationship. (Especially angel-chamber...but I plan on reading them!!) I think it would be funny if Jubilee snubs Bobby now and finds someone her own age. If only to cause jealousy. Then again I'm not the author! So anyways nice piece of work and if the rest is like this I can't wait! I clicked on it because I thought it would be a gen-x fic which yeah it was but not what I though-however it was still awesome and I will definitely try to catch myself up but darn it seems like a lot! Update soon! (wow this was long...sorry!) |
| rjb 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseTo the reader below (I can't reply via IM 'cause it's an unsigned review): Yes, Jubes met the 616 Blink briefly at the start of GenX, before her death. I did have her mention this when she encountered the Exiles version at the beginning of my series. And yeah, I know Jubes and Betsy buried the hatchet, but I figured in a spot like this there'd be some leftover resentment. Hmm... maybe I overdid it... Thanks, all, for the reviews! :) |
| Liza 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start! The twist at the end was so unexpected for me. i loved blink and Jubilee's friendship and it was cute to see cyclops make a joke! Oh I got a question, and I think you may be able to answer this:I may be wrong, but wasn't blink a member of generation x at one point but died early on? I just can't remember and I'm sure I could easily look it up but I'm being lazy! Also betsy and jubes became kind of friends when elisabeth vouched for her joining the x-men. Although I understand that's not her biggest issue when she complains to logan. Anyways fantabulous start and I can't wait for more! |
| BlueSqueak 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. Great Beast twist at the end. I also really liked the Betsy/Warren/Jon thing. And, as always, great dialogue and character interactions. |
| xoXOCutieOXox 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abuseWell of course i loved it! Jubilee's my absolute favorite character and i love how you portray her! You're an amazing writer but i have one complaint...I can't stand waiting for every chapter!! lol I love the bobby/jubes interaction...and the big twist w/ Hank. So UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ...please... |
| NoOoNoOo Lebeau 2006-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have read all of you fanfics that are on the site and they RULE!! They really are great fics, and the way you have your characters portrayed is awesome, and the fics make me laugh, there great. Monet is great, her sarcasm rules and i hope Bets gets saved, she and Wolvie would make an awesome couple. |
| Iceshadow 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome story man! I really like Jubes' characterization in this, and the tension between her and Bobby. The twist with Beast at end was the best, can't wait to see what happens next! The only thing that kind of bugged me was how often Iceman can do that reforming from vapor trick without too much difficulty, didn't he pass out after one time in the recent issue of X-Men? Also, I liked Emma's common sense regarding the students' safety at Xavier's (just look at New X-Men). Looking forward to X-Force! |
| incognegro 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseDude either Hank is a werewolf or you some how managed to bring Dark Beast Back. Seriosly though good chapter and I hope you get more reviews this time around. |
| Jay 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely loved it! I agree...Bobby's a dweeb! =P I loved how you addressed Betsy/Jon W. It was the set in the perfect context and situation. And the twist with the Beast...wow! I don't know how you do it...but however you do...you do it tres well! Can't wait until the betsy rescue! I love psylocke and I hate how marvel ignores her! She can fight sabertooth, the shadow king, the hand yet some retarded villain can kill her and then she gets replaced by sage!psh... Anyways here is not the place for a rant! UPDATE! =) =) |