 KasumioftheMist 2009-07-21 . chapter 3i like hte story update soon please! |
 MaliBiser 2008-10-31 . chapter 3Hm... So now I'm stuck with a bunch of various theories about her origin and connection to the racoon-thingy located in Gaara-kun's head... Wonder if I'm even remotely right... Oh, well. Nice story : ) |
 xkristaxitachix 2007-11-21 . chapter 1oh wow. :]
i really liked this. hinataxnaruto. keep writing and i think you should make more chapters [very entertaining] |
 Black Butterfly13 2007-07-06 . chapter 3I liked it vrty good...I think gaara should try to fimd out more! |
 Tsuki no Megami Ookami Kurai 2007-03-19 . chapter 3wolfie- great story!! update soon as u can! |
 darkdemoness41791 2007-01-31 . chapter 3O... this story is really good update soon... or I'll kidnap Gaara... |
 sleepydemon 2007-01-19 . chapter 3giggle nice must read more |
 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger 2007-01-10 . chapter 3OMFG I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! THAT WAS THE BEST FRICKING THING I'VE EVER EVER EVER READ! SQUE! ^^ |
 hashire 2007-01-08 . chapter 3Uh . . . what's awesome about that gruesome scene? Gaara killed three people because he wanted to. Uh . . . psychopath, anyone?
Wow. Isn't she special? Stopping Gaara's sand without even trying, touching him, and then kissing him? What, is Shukaku enamored with her? If so, all he ever lusts for is blood, not some underage girl who, by your description, looks A LOT like Gaara. |
 hashire 2007-01-08 . chapter 2Interest in any parts of the exam doesn't matter. The written test is still there, no matter what. It's a huge part of the whole Chuunin exam, if you haven't noticed. It weeds out the weaklings.
Geeze, hair almost down to the ground? Must get pretty dirty on the ends, and it must take her forever to wash. I'd hate that.
Fangirl or not, Sasuke barely talks to anyone, let alone some Mary Sue type. Nor would he exclaim anything (signified by an exclamation point).
Points for not sticking her in one of the Rookie Nine's teams, or Team Gai . . . but points taken away for more Mary Sues.
Yelling like that would probably cause much attacking to ensue from other teams. After all, they are trying to find other people, just like she is.
Gaara's eyes are green. Anyway, how could she see his eyes from such a long way away? They're not THAT striking to be visible from a certain distance away. |
 Awaiting My Prince 2007-01-07 . chapter 3aw...cute and...HILARIOUS! that was so funny! i've watched various epps of this anime, and only watched straight through to episode 9, and am still slowly grasping the characters since I'm reading a bunch a different manga and watchin lots o' anime. but this was SO good! I've been checking out different GaaraxOC fics and this is the best! I'm still deciding how to write mine...i think it kinda sucks...but meh, whatev. It'll be up in time. ANYWHO...
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! Please. ^-^ |
 Seadrance 2007-01-06 . chapter 3lol!
Haha, why do we seem to like torturing (or in this case, pleasuring (head out of the gutter please) the silent, seemingly emotionles boys? Ahh... I've wanted to do the same thing to: Gaara, Neji and Sasuke... or at least see it happen!
She's... kinda cute... i guess... and... Gaara's not my fav character but he's so cute! ^^
Please continue!
Slash
P.S. I'm also writing a fanfic for Naruto... and my OC's last name was going to be Hikari... I didn't get it from you, so please don't accuse me of stealing it! |
 Eddi 2007-01-06 . chapter 3I like your story. |
 Sei Ai 2007-01-06 . chapter 3Have her kill someone next, & have her & Gaara go on killing sprese. ok :P |
 colourfulxlove 2007-01-02 . chapter 3...tisk...tisk...tisk... |