I loved this story, you did a very good job with Orlando and Ariel!

Le Gasp.

but what about what happens to ariel and orlando?

Loved the side story Ariel's my favorite character out of your new generation : )

Anyways, great job on the story and I'm looking forward to your next book.

!nym!

Ohmygosh you're writing so fast! It's hard to catch up! That's a wonderful thing though.

Poor Orlie, not too smooth on the romancing part of proposing lol.

Anyways, great chapter, I liked Ariel's complaints about crying in front of the enemy.

Onwards!

!nym!

Hehe evil lord of the trecherous one's head subjected to mild concussion via sports equipment ;) Luff!

Oh Tymmie, you captivating sadistic bastard you!

I like this story a lot but I'm very sad. For even though Tiberius is a zombie, he was/is a fantastic zombie. T.T

Anyways good chapter!

!nym!

Aw bummer T.T hunky manly men from ancient times always got to go don't they? (!subtlechrislamentsubtle!)

Anyways looking forward to Ariel vs. Tymmie! Thanks for the triple updates!

!nym!

Oh my...Vange's has got a Michael complex! Well, maybe not as extreme, but you know...right? Maybe? Okay...moving on.

I have a hinkering that Vange will definitely become a power house, then kick some ass...hopefully

!nym!

o.O these poor children have such complicated backstories! I feel bad for them. I like Gissele the most out of the Pandora Daughters, she cuts right to the source of things

Poor Orlie...No toilets can be rough on a soul...

;P

Too excited to read next chapters to write more!

::fwoosh:: I'm off!

!nym!

Wow...brilliant chapters... haha. . triple update!

Oh... nice update... :) !

Yay! Eris! The supreme wedding crasher of them all ;)

good chapter, Tymmie is so evil...yet so...::sighs wistfully::

anyways, keep up the good work

!nym!

wait...uh, who's her father? (pardon my ignorance)