Interesting, but the ending confused me a little. Clarify pleeze?

Wow, that's amazing!! Makes me feel bad for Sam, though... Oh well, what's the point of living forever if you can't be with the one you love? Good job!

That was cool. Wow. I have one thing to tell you: DO ANOTHER!
I didn't see any mistakes. There might be some, but I don't point them out because I don't know what they are. (faves)

Didn't you get this from Nickleback, Saving Me? I LOVE THAT MUSIC VIDEO! Aww, now Sam is a mortal...that sux. But at least she saved Danny! XD

Great story! I've seen the video for "Savin' Me," it's pretty cool. I love the whole thing with the death clock above everyone's heads. The ending was especially good, with Sam sacrificing her immortality.
You did a wonderful job! This is going on my faves.