OOH! I like it! +Faves+

very solemn, but very well-written. I really liked how you captured his personality when he changes from Zane to Hell Kaiser. great work!

WHOAH I'm still breathless after reading that. Flawless. Absolutely incredibly perfect. I can think of no other way to describe it. Just the right degree of dark, creepy, and true to the story. You've captured that scene and his story better than anyone has and probably ever could. Could you do more like this, like when Jaden loses to Aster or when Sartorious breaks Chazz?