I lOvE it! (Jake reminds me of Jake from Twilight! :D)

Loved this story! Can u send me the image of lindsey's car?

omg, i really want to read the next one but i should go to bed, you're gettig so much better and that whole thing with Jake! omg! i didn't get the italizied part, but you totaly need to like get them back together or something.

that story totally rocks!

lyl!

Em!

o-m-g, this was the best chapter i have ever read. it was awesome. totally love the romance between lindsey and jake, it's so cute!

lyl

Em

hey, that prank was awesome, i loved how lindsey just said it so nonchalantly! it was awesome, i gotta read more now!

lyl

Em

ok, i really like the story, i mean really a lot. but the relationship between her and kevin is kinda of strange, she doesn't really show any emotion towards how she likes him. and you sorta skip around like "dad where are you, and then someone answers he went on a hunt" you could say something like she looked aroud for her dad and then asked. "wheres' dad and then someone answered.

do you see what i'm saying?

lyl

Em

hey niki, i can see the improvements as you write more, getting better! but i was just wondering, i'm not following the haunted house story so much, you kind of jump back and forth, and you didn't give enough information on the haunted house. just thought it might help you out a little.

but it's getting better!

luv ya!

em

it's good for flying by the seat of your pants, jk. anyway, there are some obvious things that you don't need to say, like the nickanme things, and your grammar isn't totally correct, but that's no biggy. i think everyone has problems with that.

but others wise it's good, good story line!

keep goin!

omg i like this story

i love it so far...

my middle name is marie too!

thts just coolio!

it was a great story and the pic were great they help to pet the pic in your head

loved it loved it loved it!aqsome!...although i wish we had a little more jake/linz fluff...but i liked how it ended...very cool!keep up the great work...possibaly a sequal...that'd be great!thnx!

oh man I really hope that you are going to do a sequel or something because that was left with some loose ends lol. I love the relationship that the three of them have. Awesome job I really loved this story.

Delia

I loved this chapter .. !

“I’m sick of being labels ditsy blonde.” Lindsey said flipping the pages of the magazine.

Ah so was I I did the same thing only I cut my hair short and dyed it red.. I had waist long blonde hair and now I have ear chin length red hair.

You really have to do a sequel. Please. Do it with her on the road. Great Story.