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animefreaks121 9/26/06 . chapter 6LOL! Prince .. Ahyuki? Man do these names get cheesey... Oh well, now that I think about it Shigure would make an awesome genie! Maybe you should add Hatori as some kind of prophet or wizard or something... can you say crystal ball? Anyway awesome job! I love how Kyo... er I mean Ahkyo, was so polite here, yet still mean in his head! So many laughs. I like the idea of Prince battles (light sabers yes!). You dont have to shrink the Authors notes. They are just the right size! Please Update Soon! Animefreaks121 |
Spasmic Fury 9/26/06 . chapter 1Man! I love my own story! I am going to update in like... 5 hours so, keep it up spazzy! Spasmic_Fury |
animefreaks121 9/25/06 . chapter 5Hey! I didnt say Akito was all evil... he does have his koolness to him... just like the "Complete Power and Ruler of All!" (I would so totally wish for that!) Anyways, its funny to see Uo acting so uptight. That doesnt usually happen so I was actually wondering what would happen. I feel so sorry for those people who got yelled at (T.T). Hana was also funny when she quickly changed the subject. And Oh My GOSH! AYA-OPOLIS! BWHAHAHAHAHAHA! That is so funny! Ahkyo... I actually said that outloud and it did sound like I was sneezing.( My dad walked in and said God bless you.) Lol! Ahem... *screams* THAT GUY IS YUKI! IT SO TOTALLY IS YUKI!Awesome job on this chapter! Please Update Soon! Animefreaks121 |
animegalnya 9/24/06 . chapter 5NICE WORK! I bet it's Yuki, but I guess I'll just have to wait...you should have some kind of competition for Tohru with Kyo and the mystery guy...watev, your story. I'll just wait. |
Edtheoddfish 9/24/06 . chapter 5Akito is one of my favorite characters too. But Shigure and Momji are my most favorites. |
Midnight Shadows Starlight 9/24/06 . chapter 5ITS YUKI! HAHAHA! I'm right right? right? I'M RIGHT! :P love the chappy...thats funny..."sounds like your dad sneezed when he gave you that name" *laughs*I love the chappy! |
animegalnya 9/23/06 . chapter 4AH HA HA! AYA'S THE GENIE! THIS IS GREAT! CONTINUE! UPDATE PLEASE! |
Edtheoddfish 9/23/06 . chapter 4Alright I must admit I was hoping Shigure-kun would be the genie but Ayame-kun is pretty good too. I'm quessing you are having Akito be a man in this instead of a girl? Also keep up the good work. |
animefreaks121 9/23/06 . chapter 4Haha! Perfect! Ayame! I really never saw that coming! Great job with that... EVIL DAMNED AKITO! I HATE HIM! *beats up Akito doll* Anyway... just a sugestion... use _ to separate ideas, like inbetween the Authors Notes and the story, or from Tohru to Kyo. But all in all, AWESOME JOB! Please Update Soon! Animefreaks121 |
animefreaks121 9/23/06 . chapter 3Gr... evil Akito! CANT YOU EVER BE NICE? *goes around yelling at random things* -a few mins pass- *kicks lamp and runs away* Muahahahaha! That will teach you you damn lamp! Ahem... anyway, where was I? Oh yeah... GREAT CHAPTER! . Ah...! Oh no! Your evil too! *cowers in the corner* Please Keep Writing! Animefreaks121 |
animegalnya 9/22/06 . chapter 2OOHH! UPDATE! I LIKE IT! |
animefreaks121 9/22/06 . chapter 2And Tohru makes it on the scene. Its perfect how they both "cry" together. Kyo is totally the bad boy type in this one. I like that! Lol. Hmm... a crazy looking old man convinces you to find treasure and escape from jail... doesnt that happen to everyone?... (hehe.) Great Job! Please Update Soon! Animefreaks121 |
animefreaks121 9/22/06 . chapter 1OMG! I absolutely LOVE Aladdin! Awesome idea for a story! Kyo would definately be awsome for this part... Hmm... whos going to be the genie I wonder? The ever knowledgeable Shigure perhaps? Hehe . Princess Tohru must arrive soon! I want Ritsu to be Abu! That would be funny! Anyways Awesome Job! Keep On Writing! Animefreaks121 |
Edtheoddfish 9/21/06 . chapter 1“So this is the boy I must get,” Akito said, “Just a young alley cat,” Ha! I love that sentance. Anyways you've got me interested! |