Overall, great writing. I distinctly prefer the first chapter though, I guess I'm not used to Iason being gentle or sweet, or Riki being submissive maybe. They're always going to be stuck in my head the way they are in the anime, cold and distrustful towards each other, even though all it did was to hide that smoldering passion that burned them down to nothing in the end.

That was so cute! Just wanted to say good job!

this is really good!

Nice!

I especially liked this chapter two-I held my breath from beginning to end!

Whew! Hot ride-loved it! Thank you so much! This is certainly a more openly tender side of Iason that is unlikely in canon, but I enjoyed your story all the same! 3

Nice!

Ah Iason told Rikki he loves him that was sweet.Those two certainly are something aren't they good story.

Ah poor Iason, Riki certainly makes him nuts doesn't he ha ha ha. Riki certainly got into a bit of trouble didn't he. Hope that Iason can make it up to his sad and injured pet, good chapter.

Ah interesting story poor Riki he has such a hard time being a pet doesn't he. Wonder what happens next can't wait to see.

Wow!This story was so cool!I've watched the OVA so many times already and I didn't exactly know why they put the petson stage like that!It must be from the book!}(...Very good jod though!XD

i luv'd it completely!

*smirk* really good

*smirk* this is good

darn Blondie society putting so much unnecessary strain on their relationship, tsk tsk...

I really liked this! love good endings-it's been awhile since I read an Ai No Kusabi fic so thanks for this one.