wonderful fic ) I do like Yuta's pov here.

This is beautiful! I love the way you put in the lyrics-they sound so natural. I hope you decide to write a sequel, or that whoever DOES keeps it up to your standard.

**smile** a little slice of the life of an immortal, tossed with hardships and sweetness. Mix well.

GREAT! I love Mermaid Saga... Needs more fans, ne? *Sighs longingly*

Anyhow, great work! I loved it, and I hope you write more soon!

Yuta & Mana 4 Ever (literally) _

I enjoyed the story. Yuta and Mana are two of my favorite 'couples' in anime.

make a 'chain' fic...hehehe...

Mana and Yuta sitting on the shore...

XD

Well, I vote for a sequal, but considering you wrote this three years ago... I think that makes my vote moot. _

Anyway, I completely agree: Mermaid Saga needs more attention! It really is a great series, everything you could ask for in one. _ Rumiko Takashi does a good job with every series she makes, but I think Mermaid Saga is the best, or close to the best, anyway- I still have an undying love for InuYasha. _

Anyway, I just love your writing- it flows so well... I can't help but get caught up in the story. _

Amazing. A Mermaid Saga fanfic. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I'd love to see more someday! Thanks for writing this!

Hee hee hee! I really like this story. I think it's cute. Yuta and Mana make such an adorable couple! At least that's my opinion. It's really sad that there are so few Mermaid fics. I really like the anime and I want to read the manga. Anywho, I would like to read more of your fics, particularly Mermaid saga fics. I like your writing style. Good job with the fic! If you couldn't tell, I liked it a lot (That was also my first sentence of this review, but I should just shut up now huh?) Yes, I believe I will shut up now, I talk too much. This is why I normally don't leave reviews. I always write too much and take too much time. I'm bad at summarixing things. LOL Good job and thanks for listening to me ramble on and on...)

amazingly romantic, without being gag me with a spoon sappy. i loved every line of it

This was great! No gore or fight scenes but, hey, you can't have senseless violence ALL the time. I loved this story and you captured Yuta and Mana beautifully. Rock on!

loved it, very well done!

i looooove it sad i was crying

Nice work. Flowed fairly well, though I agree with the earlier commenter about doing away with some of the parenthesis. Good for an emotion piece, though the filling in of backstory using Yuta's thoughts was a bit dry in places. Still, it was a necessity for those not familiar with the series. Overall very nice.

that is so cool. You like enya and Mermaid saga? i think you are the most wonderful person i met so far.