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Elric Roxana 2007-11-29 . chapter 15
The one-shots were very good, I liked them a lot! And you should consider yourself talented since you paired Edward with Al and I really enjoyed reading these... Congrats!
See ya!
m.t.dog 2007-10-12 . chapter 15
Oh, this was so sweet! ^_^ I'm so glad that you started to write Elricest again! You're an amazing author, especially with Elricest, and I loved this chapter! Please update soon! ^_^ Later!
Ai-Kusabana 2007-04-28 . chapter 14
Hi! Great chappie! Aw... so cute! Please update soon!
CaitlinNeko 2007-04-27 . chapter 14
I loved these! I personally, also see Elricest possibilities in several of his songs...sometimes EdHei with a side of Elricest (like Far From Home and Chance)...you're lucky to have the CDs, too! I want to get them, but it'd be hard ;-;
m.t.dog 2007-04-19 . chapter 14
Oh, these were so sweet! ^_^ I loved all of them tremendously, and I can't wait until you write more! (which you had better do...) Every fingle one of them was so cute, and nice, and wonderful, and...and...absolutly amazing! ^_^ Really, each of them was really good, the last one probably being my favorite, though the sencd to last one was pretty good...but, then again, so was the first was...oh, what the hell, they were all perfect! ^_^ Write more soon, please! Later!
Ai-Kusabana 2007-03-25 . chapter 13
Hi there! Great fic! Great chappie! Poor Edward! *sobs*

It would be really nice if you could make a oneshot or drabble about Ed being uke and Al being seme or maybe a oneshot or drabble about Al being jealous of someone (you decided who) who comes too close to Ed and that Al becomes possesive of Ed with Ed being clueless and yeah... Ed is uke and Al is seme... It would be great if you could... It's up to you of course!

Hope you'll update soon! ^_^
m.t.dog 2007-03-23 . chapter 13
Oh, wow, this was amazing!! ^_^ Truley, you're a great writer, and I loved how you made this totally uverused idea your own! It was unique, and wonderful, and amazing...it was perfect! ^_^ I absolutly loved it, and I can't wait to see what you write next! Later!
Sora Blade707 2007-03-23 . chapter 13
Aw, poor Ed didn't get to go to the dance with Al...

Ed: He's not so bad at danceing, too.

Al: -blush-

All right, shut up you two so that I can get this review over with. -drinks some hot chocolate-

Ed: -whispers to Al- Is she in her insomniac mood again?

Al: -whispers back- Yep.

Ya know, I can hear you two. -sips hot chocolate-

Ed and Al: Meep...-thinks that Sora's as scary as Izumi when Sora is in her insomniac mood-

Anyway, hope you continue with the drabbles! They're really cute and I'm addicted to them. >_> I blame you two -points at Elric brothers- for being so hot and cute together as a couple.

Ed and Al: ...and?

Yeah...they knew that...crud...bet you didn't know that Izumi and I get along quite well together, eh?

Ed and Al: ...-shudders with fear-

-evil laugh- -clears throat- So, see you in chapter fourteen!

Al: And sorry for this pointless (sort of) review...

Ed: Sora's only good at writing things random anyway... -glares at Sora-

-blissfully unaware as she pets a random dog- You're so cute! Yes you are! Yes you are! -goes on and on about the dog-

Ed and Al: I pity the dog...
CaitlinNeko 2007-03-23 . chapter 13
I loved this new addition! The mental picture of them dancing together is just so cute (and now I want to try and find that song). But the ending was still kind of sad...
Queen Vampiress 2007-03-23 . chapter 13
This was actually sad. It choked me up at the end, but maybe I'm just emotional today. :) It's that, they could never be together, and Ed's all alone. The dancing was prett though, and the idea was beautiful. You worded it well, and i loved it!
thoughtless dreamer 2007-03-23 . chapter 9
This was -very- well written for your first attempts at writing something with this sort of content in it. I want to comment on your good use of details when it came to setting the scene; I could really picture the setting ^^

Elricest rules~
thoughtless dreamer 2007-03-23 . chapter 1
*Dies of the cuteness* Oh my God~ I just squealed REALLY loudly, but that's okay xD This was just TOO cute. I loved it so much... Aww! Loved it, loved it, LOVED it! *Dances*
Sora Blade707 2007-03-14 . chapter 12
More cuteness (and hotness X3) in these drabbles ('cept for eleven, I couldn't read that one) is what I've noticed! X3 Anyway, can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Sora Blade707 2007-03-14 . chapter 6
Aw...so cute! -squeals- Anyway, just got through half of it when I decided to finally comment. -sweatdrop- So...really cute chapters! I also noticed that almost everyone is in Al's POV. Well, I'll be commenting at chapter 12!
CaitlinNeko 2007-02-27 . chapter 12
I squealed, and started tearing up. That was too bloody cute! You have a gift, for this
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