Adolescent PLANTS are scary. That's all. I like that concept though. Nice fic.

I really felt her overwhelming hurt in this chapter!
you did it in a excellent way! Knives is always one to act on pride and follow his ego!
at the end, I almost expected that he would say he came to apologize, but as I read what truly happened, it feels more in character!
awesome job!

It's frightening!
and I loved the bathroom and cutie/hottie part! wait, I think I just loved everything! there is absolutely nothing to say about it! great!

This is AMAZING! the plot is awesome!
I am so glad I met this story! you're a wonderful writer!
the suspens is killing me

lol! PERFECT!

now thats a good story. write a sequel. write another. promise I'll read it.

OMG! This would have to be my most favorite of all your stories I've read so far.

Even though I wasn't too big on the Vash and Millie pairing, that could have been ignored.

The wings! And feathers! I loved that!! And the cave, and fighting! *squeals* I loved this so much!

Knives reminded me of...a dark angel...a dark, teenage, horny angel. It was rather cute!

And your writing style is great, as well. I guess a beta is useful, I just got myself one ^^

But again, I loved this. I love the way you write, and how you manage to keep them in character is beyond me!

Great story^^

hee hee ! i loved it

OMG! you are amazing! I Loved it! keep up with the knives meryl fics because I love them. you are very talented keep up the good work!

Aw! What a cute ending! I think I'll stick to the edited. Knives is a little WILD in the edited so it's gotta be wilder in the uncut. LOL. But aww he like's her. I'm guessing Vash was a lot nicer on his side judging by him and Millie cuddling. Your stories are very romantic!

Whoa! This is a very interesting take on Vash/Knives' "growing up." Of all things, Knives' libido choosing Meryl? That's a trip, please update soon!

Oh, wow, she so wants to hit that and wants to let him. lol. I love. More.

XD

Oh, nice. Knives is all "in the mood" now. Meryl needs to think better. She can be a tad slow. *is now fearing what's going on on the vash side* O__0

OMG. How stupid can one woman be?! Meryl wanted it. Simple as that.

Ahh, What's going on? Are the twins picking out their mates or what? Please update again!!