gonna read it again and yeah idk when i'll read it but i will

*sigh dreamily* This fic was so romantic and sweet! I really loved it. Thank you SO much for writing it for us. It proved to be a great read.

hey great epically awesome story! this is my third time reading it and i still love it :) first time ive looked at ur authors note down at the bottom and i wanna say congrats on doing so well with most of ur japanese , there are a few mistakes but for someone who doesn't speak the language u did pretty well;

Aniki – older brother it's actually just 'ani' or formally oniisan

Outosan – informal for father this is actually more formal, commonly used for other peoples fathers rather than ur own. its like saying father rather than dad

Chichiue – very formal for father never even heard of this word but 'chichi' is informal for father, you only use it towards ur own pretty much like saying dad or daddy


everything else is really well done :)

x

You have written a wonderful story!
I loved the entire thing!

Wow. You really pulled it off. This story is amazing. I bow to your greatness! *bow*

Dear Yashodoa,

Okay, I was readin this at 2:13 am.
And I read the bottom; the author notes to be exact.
Well, I read you are from Colorado.
Which is where I wish to live when I grow up completely.
Anyway, I live in Alabama one of the shiny warm states.
I would rather be living there where it snows!
God, I love snow. I've only seen it twice in my life.
At which, I don't remember well.
One of my best friends live in Colorado.
Myself am hoping; to do well enough in writing to be able to move there and produce the many books I have already started.

Your Story is very good by the way..
I have enjoyed it thus fare I imagin the rest will be as well.
Well, I just felt like sharing my little randomness to you.
With it's some what ironic intanglement.
I which you a prefect life a very good day/night (when ever you read this).

Sincerly,

Heather L. Star.

i love it! it was beautiful.

kya! i love it! *pulls out hair* ek! i'm slowly turning into an insane fanfic maniac!

:D OMG... DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I WAS LOOKING FOR YOUR STORY?! I read when it came out and I love it! I was crying when I came back to look for it (like right now?!) but idion't know if you edited or not...

still it has what i read before :D :P This fic is very...EXCELLENT!

yer it was a compliment sorry that i didnt explain more it was quite late soo i was tired but i reli love ur story! =]

have you ever read the carpathian novels by christine feehan? they make the 'love making' sound perfect too lol. anyway you sould read the Carpathian novels they have a very good story line and they connect to each other soo yea um ...

I love this story and I do want to read 'Water and Fire'.

this was really great! it is so cool that you can write these cool/great/awesome fics!

Great story.

love the story, since you allready told that you wont post more to this story i will not ask (But it could have been nice if there were more in this story)... and if any of my words are misspelled then blame it on my big confused head (that is what happens when i try to do my homework, hehe)... soo, write more (it is not an option, it is a command XD)