Yay, I haven't had the pleasure of reading this one in a long while.

Great story! I don't remember if it was explained or not or if it will be, but it's bugging the hell out of me... why doesn't Cloud remember the encounter he had with Sephiroth in the showers?

update soon

Need more!! >.< It's great!! Plz x10 Update soon!

This is good, don't put yourself down like that. I see that you haven't updated in a while, but I really hope you do.

Honey, update soon! I wanna know what the hell is gonna happen.

I just discovered this story and I really like it, I hope you continue with it.

haha, cloud had a wet dream.
x3
daw shucks, thats cute.
sorta.
i'd like to see more of cloud and sephiroth...together. but its your story, ducky. and its great.
update soon.

Aw.
Poor Zack. D:
I like how this is going. Its really interesting, to me. :]
And bahh, thats pretty sick. The whole, raped nurse deal, I mean.

For the first final fantasy fic, it was great.
I completely understand your frustration. xD
I go through that constantly, all these good ideas and no idea how to word them, but it turned out great.
I'm only done the first capter, but y'know I'm gonna review the others too. :3

I really like how you wrote this, sure there are a few spelling errors but they aren't that noticeable very hot first chapter. ^-^

please please please please update soon!

this is getting really really good!

Go ZCS!

Are you freaking nuts?! Suck at writing? That was flipping awesome! You had lots of detail, and kept the reader interested.

if it sucked i would'nt have bothered reading yer story -thwap- yer a good writer...so stop bieng self defeating!! >_

this fanfic is absolutely not a crappy fanfic! do not lower urself like that! i love this fic! keep it up and thanx for the update...newayz, does zack know that cloud had a naughty dream? how come wen cloud saw sephy...he wasnt all flustered and stuff after wat happened to them? he was more embarassed that sephy found him in a compromising position! weird...and zack like sephiroth?! gross! ja ne!