you succeed even when you fail...

Wow. I had depressingly low expectations going into this but I read it twice :) good job.

Can you say denial?

Bitch please! You do care! 'It will never be love' my ass...if it wasn't, he would have said, "Guess what? I'm a crimminal!" or something...

Great story by the way. How come the best Itachix[insert OC girl name here] parings are always the best?

Uhm, the end was a little confusing, though an overall good fic. ^.^

the line after it will never be love should be something like "for he is not weak."

He's in denial.

Aww :D Itachi made Sharingan Babies XD

why isn't it love? Maybe i shouldn't read after midnight, no brain cells.

T.T aw

Good.So good.

Thanks a lot. Have never read such cut Itachi fic.

the idea was random. You are an amazing writer though. Great talent, pursue this.

Nico-chan

I have been looking everywhere for people who can write like you can.

being able to fully describe a character in such a small amount of words is a necessity, and you have sucessfully fulfilled that.

Welcome to the top 5% of

(P.S.-I'm not an actual official of but I DO know what I'm talking about. Great job.)

Right, who is he trying to kid? Sorry pal but you don't give up everything for a girl and kid and not care, probably even love, them.