   0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Uhm, the end was a little confusing, though an overall good fic. ^.^ |
 koden.shokkou 2008-08-07 . chapter 1the line after it will never be love should be something like "for he is not weak." |
 Kijo Asuka 2008-07-21 . chapter 1He's in denial. |
 Hypno 2008-06-28 . chapter 1Aww :D Itachi made Sharingan Babies XD |
 inscape.peril 2008-05-06 . chapter 1why isn't it love? Maybe i shouldn't read after midnight, no brain cells. |
 Wing Moon 2008-04-10 . chapter 1T.T aw |
| LIQUIDCELL 2008-04-04 . chapter 1 Good.So good. |
| Tatacolt 2008-03-23 . chapter 1 Thanks a lot. Have never read such cut Itachi fic. |
| Nightmareish Rain 2007-11-06 . chapter 1 the idea was random. You are an amazing writer though. Great talent, pursue this.
Nico-chan |
| MasterMenthe 2007-10-30 . chapter 1 I have been looking everywhere for people who can write like you can.
being able to fully describe a character in such a small amount of words is a necessity, and you have sucessfully fulfilled that.
Welcome to the top 5% of
(P.S.-I'm not an actual official of but I DO know what I'm talking about. Great job.) |
 kirallie 2007-09-08 . chapter 1Right, who is he trying to kid? Sorry pal but you don't give up everything for a girl and kid and not care, probably even love, them. |
 n00b-masta2112 2007-02-18 . chapter 1Fascinating concept. |
| Artemis1000 2007-01-17 . chapter 1 Aw, it's so beautiful and bittersweet. I had to blink away some tears. Actually, I believe that you succeeded to write an in-character Itachi romance, I admire you for this. And it's all the more amazing since you paired him with an OC and still managed to pull it off. I love how Itachi is conflicted and keeps trying to convince himself that it's not love. And while he denies it, you show his love for his wife in subtle little ways that are very believable. |
 notesonlife 2006-11-14 . chapter 1AH! MY fic was supposed to happen like this! Maybe it was like, ESP or something. XD No matter. Very cute, very cute, for something short, it was sweet and well done. It was kept very much in character, and for Itachi, that is one of the hardest to do, and his thought and processes are detached and simple, much as Itachi is. Keep writing!
~hyperB4eva |
 BlackMageRose13 2006-10-31 . chapter 1*pang in heart strings* Good work! For an OC that was incredible, you really deserve a lot more reviews than these two.
Itachi was written very much in character and I love how you've written that Itachi seems to at odds with himself over not joining the final Akatsuki battle to stay with them when it was never love. aw |
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