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| Autumn 2008-07-11 ch 29, anon. | abuseI believe I have a diagnosis for your problem. You have the "Short Chapter Syndrome", also known as SCS. Symptoms include writer's block, pointless frustration over your writing, and, finally, short chapters. In order to fix the problem, read inspiring books and listen to inspiring music until you have written 3 chapters that contain 4 or more pages. Thank you, |
| The WeyrWoman 2008-07-07 ch 9,  | abuseSometimes, things you are are the best things to make fun of... as long as you don't hate yourself, you have plausible deniability (sp) against racism, sexism, and that sort of thing. |
| The WeyrWoman 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseRandomly... aren't koi a type of fish? Or am I just that idiotic? |
| The WeyrWoman 2008-07-07 ch 5, | abuse...had forgotten that there was an animorphs /show/ too. Heh. Comes from only getting five channels myself. On the other side, gotta love the series, in book-form, at least. |
| rena 2008-06-15 ch 27, anon. | abuseI LOVE your fanfiction! After I finish reading it, I'm going back and reading it over! And over! Just for the hell of it! One thing I don't like, though, is how gay Itachi is. ;w; I won't complain though; it's part of your fan-fiction. IT's just painful to see someone like Itachi-niisan so, un-manly! TTwTT |
| YukinoKara 2008-06-14 ch 12, | abusewhat's the sexy utensil theme? |
| YukinoKara 2008-06-14 ch 4, | abuseheheh, learning a language by songs and movies/shows is so much easier, that's how I'm learning japanese :P But maybe that's not so good, I do taekwondo and when we were told to say 1-10 in korean, I said "ichi" instead of "hana" hahah, my friend got a good laugh out of that one -_-" great chapter :D |
| YukinoKara 2008-06-14 ch 3, | abuseI hate homophobes...which means I hate one of my "best" friends :P lmao, bi people are awesome! -is bi- hahahah |
| marukisha 2008-04-24 ch 12, anon. | abuseO.my.god.your friggen story is awsome!! I've been dead ass on my side kick just dyin!! I've deen showing more facial expressions in 5 seconds then I have in my entire life!! Dammit you can write so well...fuck! All I can do is draw (/ x \)FUCK!THERE'S SO MUCH TO READ!!BUT I CAN'T TURN AWAY!!DAMN YOU AND YOUR PHYCHONISIS SPOONS!! Im now on the 12 or 13th story.man! How do you come up with this stuff-no.what I really wanna know is how you caom up with those"IM SO SHORT THAT" lines that ed is screaming!oaml its fuckin halarious!!..Gah!"gays need to be exterminated?"them bitchez need to get shot!GOD I HATE THOSE EVERY-FIVE-SECONDS-LIKE-SAYIN-HOES! Toe nail bitein BITCHES!! BET THEY SMELL LIKE MAD HOT WOLF PUSSY!!...( calms ) I have so many questions!! Ah!( blush )b-but its ok if you don't want to answer them all!! How old are u!? What race are you!?japanese!? What's your name! Are u really bi!? Awsome! Are u from america! If you are what part!?and lastly...what does yoshi mean and ttebayo?please answer me back! It would be a such a drag if I spent all this time typin on this tiny ass sidekick...sigh |
| BloodRavN 2008-04-23 ch 23, | abuseSigh. I wish heterophobia was a real word. Would explain a lot xD Poor Ed. Envy's being mean but that's life =.= But a more pressing issue: WINRY KISSED ED! ARE YOU FREAKING INSANE!? God, she cries way too much >_< GO ED for the punch =D |
| BloodRavN 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. The Tasmanian school system is different from the NSW system o_O In the Sydney area, we have preschool (optional; usually 4 to 5 years old), Primary school (K-6; K being Kindergarten), High School (7-12) and University/TAFE. Guess it's not the same everywhere, huh? But, LOL. Pink uniforms xD We have that here. A high school too T_T;; But yeah, I like the idea! Keep at it! |
| OMFG!(no oh em ge...) 2008-04-13 ch 28, anon. | abuseI LOVE YOUR STORY! THERE'S ONLY ONE WEIRD THING IN IT! ITACHI! WHy is Itachi being girly? that is sad..(sobs in a dark corner b/c one of her fav characters turns into a girl...) |
| Earthly Wind 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI just red the first chapter and what I think? COMPLETE AWESOMENESS xD Seeing that theres more chapters ahead it seems the pairing is already decided but... Gaara/ed? Naruto/ed? XD |
| Corn Cob Xov 2008-02-10 ch 18, | abuseGood Job! Sad ending though... -sniffles- |
| silver candle 2008-02-08 ch 29, | abuseDon't say that, I liked it. -pouts- Even if you ended the story on a cliffy... But, anyway, I'm glad that Envy and Ed are back together. Great job on the whole thing |