 Rancorous 2008-04-06 . chapter 1Umm...your username is retarded. Are you referring to yourself as a crustacean and all your crusty gloriness? Or should I say goriness because that would certainly explain my hemorrhage after having plowed through this fic.
1. DON'T attempt to be profound. You are one of those unfortunate inbreeds who could never pull it off in the first place. Ergo, you make yourself look even more moronic by such a grand endeavor. Ergo, go commit suicide. We thank you deeply.
2. You are lame.
3. Your characterization is lame. Oh wait, there is no characterization.
4. Please go die. THANK YOU.
LUFF YOU!! |
 CoCo 2008-04-06 . chapter 1 CUTE! Love it, please write more, and also, for the story you wrote with Sarge, could you please update that since it's on Chapter 11 and you guys haven't updated for 3 or 4 months...:) thanks!~ |
 AUSUMIST AIM3131 2008-03-04 . chapter 1 FUNNY! AND CUTE! |
 LillyYuri 2007-10-31 . chapter 1I loved it!
cute!
^_^ |
 $635 2007-10-20 . chapter 1 good fic. |
 kodoku na oujo 2007-05-18 . chapter 1That was too adorable!! Just too adorable for words X3!! I aboslutely loved it. I didn't know Sasuke could be so poetic, neh? Naruto, you lucky son-of-a-gun you!! Getting Sasuke all to yourself. ((SHARE!! lol XP)) Again, I loved it!! |
 MsKarlz4 2007-05-05 . chapter 1aww I loved this ^_^ |
 DigPuff 2007-04-12 . chapter 1Adorable! :3
~nWad |
 brenu 2007-01-31 . chapter 1cute |
 Disenchanting Smiles 2006-11-20 . chapter 1Aw... Adorableness. Very cute story. |
 Letta 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Oh, cute! Short and sweet. I like the interaction. Naruto loses an argument and then sort of wins at the end, nice. Sasuke is a total softie at heart. Good job! |
 Kia ko Kung 2006-09-28 . chapter 1 aw
you had me with the last lines
"But you … your like the last dying ray of sunlight … but you outshine everything.”
[...]are you sweet talking me now, Sasuke?”
[...] “Maybe.”
Thanx! |
 mademoisele 2006-09-24 . chapter 1^ ^
that's so adorable. "are you sweet talking me now, Sasuke?" "Maybe." >X) |
 Fat Anorexic 2006-09-23 . chapter 1That was pretty cute. Good job. |
 FastForward 2006-09-22 . chapter 1THANK YOU SO MUCH! This was so cute! OMG! I LOVE IT! Thank you! :huggle: You're my hero! I love you! :3 |