aah i absolutely loved the 2 new chapters!
keep up the great work,you should try and get this published

Sweet work! Now I know why It's been so long since ya updated

Great story. Love Al's personality. No matter what you planned to do with this story, it's still a good one. Keep with it.

I remember seeing this story's title many times while scanning the Eva fics page, but for some reason I kept passing it over. On a whim, I read the first chapter, and kept going straight through till 11. I was a fan of Knight Rider back in the day, and this was actually a nice refreshing story. I always enjoy something in this style, entertaining and yet not full of itself. A very nice piece of work. Heh, and the way 11 ended... indeed leaves up wanting for more. Keep 'em comin.

This story is interesting please update soon.

What some writers think is crap some readers find to be a chapter that still flows nicely.

Glad to see the update hope 2 see another soon.

..well thanks well it seams all is going to end well continue

I agree, definately not crap, the only thing I didn't like about it is how short it is... and only because I want to know what happens next xD. Good work man, cya next update (which is soon hopefully).

I love this story! Absolutely love it!

Please update soon. I want to see Asuka and Rei's reactions to seeing Shinji again!

I love and hate this story.

The way things are going he'll see Asuka and Rei just before Burr kills them!

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Definitely not crap. And having him catch up to her the way he did was actually very good.

aahh had to re read all of it
but when is chapter 11 going to be out? i cant wait to read it

I'll give you your due this is a very good story and the only problem I have with it is completley based on my own reading style so I'm not going to bother you with it. Keep up the excellent work.

yay! thanks for the new chapter loved it
and also thanks for replying to my question on the last chapter.
lol keep it all going.

I've been meaning to get to this story for a while and finally did.

Excellent work. It's well written (just a few spelling errors and some instances where simialr sounding words are mixed up. There - their, past - passed etc.)

You've paid a lot of attention to detail and I like to see that.

Now that he's nearing his objective, it might be good to describe and detail some of his thoughts about his girls as he gets closer to seeing them again. A little introspection on his part (lone warriors are prone to that), that would give some nice depth to how he feels about them and just how much the three of them truly mean to him. It would also put further emphasis on his level of commitment to being with them again.

That in depth emotional view is the only thing I see missing so far from this story.

Again, great work and I reall look forward to seeing more of this.