Oh, very nice! I like the possibilities held in this! Very good job of chatching Achmed's dry and sarcastic way of talking and thinking.

It figures that Achmed would be thrown off enough by a charismatic woman to get kind of angry. :) I think you should make a second chapter to this! Maybe advance what happened between these two. Achmed does seem to be haunted by he in Elegy for a Lost Star, the fifth book, someting about childbirth...at any rate, would love to see a continuation of this.

Wow the story is great! But Achmed knew his father, he was his master. And this is the only thing that I couldn't resist to correct :) Maybe you could make some longer story of it?