i really hope you are planning to finish this story!! please!! pretty please!!

Dude! How could you leave it at 'And the life drained from Rodney's eyes'?! Are you trying to make me cranky?

I really wanna know the ending to this please.

UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE!


~Dani

ok seriously...i dislike cliffhangers...seriously
please continue this story. Rodney's dieing TToTT it should not be so. i want to know what happens, i have recently just watching Stargate Atlantis and Rodney is my fave character.
they should hand over the Ladon..really they should.
anyway great story that must be continued! please. i shall wait for the update ^__^

very very good. Am already anxiously waiting for the next part.; :D

I would love to see what happens in Descent, Will you write more, PLEASE!

This would have been a much better episode than what they had, great job! Next Chapter?
:)

brilliant, post more soon!

WOW, I'm really loving this story.
I hope you update it soon.

Ooh! This is so cool to see the character reactions... you're doing it better than what the episode had.

No no no not Rodney. Sheppard can't break his other hand!

I wonder how the feeding affects Rodney's hypoglaecemia.

I am interested to read his interactions with the wraith that has been feeding on him.

I would be happy to beta this if you want...its a really nice change to the story,...very well done

Kira

huh, well done

Kira

Meep! What a cliffhanger!

wow, what a great chapter. i can not wait for the next chapter. this is a good spin on "common ground."