Beautiful fanfiction - you have a way with words that makes them seem completely natural yet also very profound and with far deeper meanings than are originally revealed. You used the characters well, particularly Bobby who, poor thing, didn't exactly have the largest of roles in 1602. I like that you developed him here, as well as establishing a relationship for him and Jean and Warren. After all, it isn't just Scott who misses her. Lovely work, and I hope to see more 1602 from you.

Oh, very, very nice! I've always loved the Bobby/Warren friendship dynamic, and you've captured it beautifully.

And of COURSE everybody loved Jean. How could they not? ;)