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eine.hexe
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
I think I have a weakness for star-crossed lovers :)

Excellent job once again. I might be falling in love with your works, otherwise I cannot explain this strange feeling I get whenever I read them. This particular one left a dreadfully bitter taste on my tongue and I hate it and love it at the same time. I'm glad most of your stories are one-shots, cause I don't think I could handle all this greatness in huge quantity :)

I think you portrayed amazingly his relationship with Kagome vs Kikyou. He has a different bond with each of them and you emphasized it quite correctly, even though shortly. Because Kagome is always willing and so... there... but he can't stop running to Kikyou every time she comes around... because he can't forget about her. I would have never chosen these words, but these are indeed the correct words for this plight.

There are a lot of stories out there that don't deserve half of the reviews they get (I'm still clueless as to how people like what they write), but you should have thousands of reviewers chasing you around and worshiping you :)

Great job with this one :)
Loisen
2007-12-19 . chapter 1
i just wanted to say (before the end) that inuyasha could have taken kagome to her time. and then you're doing it. :)

never a good sappy end? ;)
aya143
2007-04-29 . chapter 1
another great one!!
The Sacred Tree
2007-01-17 . chapter 1
THTAT WAS AWSOME...
Pwetty-Pwincess
2006-12-28 . chapter 1
Wnderful story!
blackrose8666
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
omg thats so sad i nearly cried when i read it but still its really good
BlackParade
2006-11-26 . chapter 1
Oh, man...You're so good at writing!! I love this one! It's so sadd...And good at the same time! And I sso agree on your pairings!! Some people just don't get it, though, huh? ^^ Keep on writing!
AnitaGrace
2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Oh... poor Inuyasha... I feel for you so much.
en route
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
that was so achingly sweet. i have a soft spot for sad fics. thank you so much for writing this.

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2cute4u3
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
aw that made me cry so sad
Caitriona
2006-10-04 . chapter 1
While I can see why Inu would not be able to tell her, I really can't see why he would leave her...

But this piece is rather well written. Thanks for sharing with us.

Caitriona
Cariad Breila
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
huh,... it was well written,... i guess...sad though
Lady Cai
2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Hey! Great Fic! write more

Much Lub,
~*Lady Cai
Ashtari
2006-09-28 . chapter 1
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It's poignant, well-written and thoroughly engrossing. I love the quiet desperation of Inuyasha, and the knowledge in Kagome. Truly, TRULY wonderful work, here. It's maybe not a happy ending, but life isn't all happy endings. :) Thank you for this.
Johnna
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
NO NO NO! DAMN YOU DAMN YOU DAMN YOU! I HATE YOU! wait no i dont but still, DAMN YOU HOW CAN U DO THIS TO INU AND KAGS!?!?!?
HORRIBLE!really it was pretty good even so , DAMN YOU!
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