 eine.hexe 2009-07-01 . chapter 1I think I have a weakness for star-crossed lovers :)
Excellent job once again. I might be falling in love with your works, otherwise I cannot explain this strange feeling I get whenever I read them. This particular one left a dreadfully bitter taste on my tongue and I hate it and love it at the same time. I'm glad most of your stories are one-shots, cause I don't think I could handle all this greatness in huge quantity :)
I think you portrayed amazingly his relationship with Kagome vs Kikyou. He has a different bond with each of them and you emphasized it quite correctly, even though shortly. Because Kagome is always willing and so... there... but he can't stop running to Kikyou every time she comes around... because he can't forget about her. I would have never chosen these words, but these are indeed the correct words for this plight.
There are a lot of stories out there that don't deserve half of the reviews they get (I'm still clueless as to how people like what they write), but you should have thousands of reviewers chasing you around and worshiping you :)
Great job with this one :) |
 Loisen 2007-12-19 . chapter 1i just wanted to say (before the end) that inuyasha could have taken kagome to her time. and then you're doing it. :)
never a good sappy end? ;) |
 aya143 2007-04-29 . chapter 1another great one!! |
 The Sacred Tree 2007-01-17 . chapter 1THTAT WAS AWSOME... |
 Pwetty-Pwincess 2006-12-28 . chapter 1Wnderful story! |
 blackrose8666 2006-11-27 . chapter 1omg thats so sad i nearly cried when i read it but still its really good |
 BlackParade 2006-11-26 . chapter 1Oh, man...You're so good at writing!! I love this one! It's so sadd...And good at the same time! And I sso agree on your pairings!! Some people just don't get it, though, huh? ^^ Keep on writing! |
 AnitaGrace 2006-10-21 . chapter 1Oh... poor Inuyasha... I feel for you so much. |
 en route 2006-10-15 . chapter 1that was so achingly sweet. i have a soft spot for sad fics. thank you so much for writing this.
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 2cute4u3 2006-10-05 . chapter 1aw that made me cry so sad |
 Caitriona 2006-10-04 . chapter 1 While I can see why Inu would not be able to tell her, I really can't see why he would leave her...
But this piece is rather well written. Thanks for sharing with us.
Caitriona |
 Cariad Breila 2006-10-01 . chapter 1huh,... it was well written,... i guess...sad though |
 Lady Cai 2006-09-30 . chapter 1Hey! Great Fic! write more
Much Lub,
~*Lady Cai |
 Ashtari 2006-09-28 . chapter 1I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It's poignant, well-written and thoroughly engrossing. I love the quiet desperation of Inuyasha, and the knowledge in Kagome. Truly, TRULY wonderful work, here. It's maybe not a happy ending, but life isn't all happy endings. :) Thank you for this. |
 Johnna 2006-09-24 . chapter 1 NO NO NO! DAMN YOU DAMN YOU DAMN YOU! I HATE YOU! wait no i dont but still, DAMN YOU HOW CAN U DO THIS TO INU AND KAGS!?!?!?
HORRIBLE!really it was pretty good even so , DAMN YOU! |