This really good, I wonder who her sister and brother is.. O.O KEEP On writing!!

I'd love to read some more!

WHY HAVE U STOPPED?! This is a great start...I loved it already...mostly becuz that's my name... :)
UPDATE!

it seems good one...
so give us more...

yes...a new story.youre a star.
Jessica sound like a strong character.
please update son.

yay! Anew story I hope this one is just a good at the last one your previous stpry was awesome!

Great start. You took the whole 'woman stationed with Easy' and came up with your own way to tell that story and it looks like this one should be interesting. There was a teeny bit of repetition, but not that it took away from the story or anything. There, some constructive criticism heh. I look forward to reading what happens next. :)