Good ending.

Wow...really good.

I liked it a lot.

I loved it.

This is wonderfully written, it's like Longshot's third-person POV. Or something. This is absolutely one of my favorites.
I'd say more, but my brain lacks good adjectives.
~bandit

take the time to write out each and every one of those bunnies... there's not enough longerbee (smellershot) out there. Thank you

(hugs you for writing this) You can guess what I'm going to say. I loved it XD

Wow, brilliant fic. I'm totally and utterly blown away. The way you portrayed their relationship, Longshot's acceptance of who Smellerbee is... totally and utterly in awe. And you portrayed their relationship beautifully, too--a sort of soft, gentle relationship, one that's not so much physical as it is emotional understanding.

Your fic puts mine to shame. XD I absolutely adore this fic and am putting it on my favorites, forever.

- hl

YAY! This is quickly becoming on of my favorite couples in Avatar...and it warms my heart to have people express it so well! GReat job@

Aww. How cute.

What did the solider do?

This is probably the only pairing that I support. Most of the time I'm on the sidelines, but I've never once read a bad Smellershot.

Thank you, for not breaking that tradition.

::fangirl squeal::
Oh, I love these. Absolutely beautiful.
((And, if you saw "City of Walls and Secrets", I'd say it was canon-approved.))
You are awesome. Can we expect more?
And don't you love that writing style? The kind of jump from place to place. It's fun.

Adds to faves. I LOVE U!
I LOVE U!
favorite pairing!
Meep!
Write more... PLEASE

At last, a solid ship.

And so well done, I can't think of enough good things to say.