Nice. In character and sweet. C/A rules!

That was perfect, and when Cloud noticed that Aerith would make a good mother that made me go, "aw...". The ending was perfect, thanks for writing such an awesome Clerith! ]

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yay i loved it hey will you continue oh please i want to know what happens next!!:(:)

o.o!! aww... wat a cute story... well... keep on writing!! ^^

Aw, that was such a heart-warmer. I loved the part where Cloud realized that Aerith would be a very caring mother. That was too cute.

Nice. But if I remember right, he had a bat wing.

Nice.