This is canon to me. Even if it was just about the fight for you, thank you for putting in all the rest.

YES. YES. YES.

Just. Everything. The hurt, the pain, Hitsugaya trying to be patient, the way Hinamori didn't call him Shirou-chan until the very end, and especially, especially

"Bastard!” she screamed, and it was not the tearful cry of a frightened and broken young woman that he had been listening to on and off for weeks. It was the enraged shriek of a young woman who was, by all appearances, about to pound his ** into the asphalt.


JUST. YES. Hinamori's always struck me as that sort of a girl. When she believed Hitsugaya had killed Aizen, did she calmly and meekly ask him if this was so? No. She GOT OUT HER SWORD AND ATTACKED!

Er, if you haven't gotten it yet, I love your characterisation of Hinamori. ^^

Love it. Best part is, in my opinion, all the hitsuhina is implied. I swear, I spent the entire fic waiting for the 'because I love you, Hinamori!' like in all the other fics. But, there wasn't, and for some reason that makes it just that much better^^

DAMN! It ended. Just as it got interesting too. I don't know why, but I really liked the little fight scene. It was sad, and kinda cute in a messed-up way.

Thanks for writing this!

Absolutely one of the best fics I have read. Cheers to you! Keep it up!

Haha! Now THAT'S a kind of interaction you never see between these two. And, the way I see it, it's wholly probable. You're right; she did get up to go kick his ** even though she wasn't entirely sure about the whole situation. There's no way Hinamori is as weak as people think. She IS a vice captain after all. You don't get that seat unless you got some serious oomph.

Man, I so enjoyed this! Awesome portrayal!

~HH

Owo... woa... that nearly made me cry... it was so sweet... one of a kind... I need to read more stuff like this these days... pieces like these inspire me so much... thank u 4 the oneshot!...
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I'm so awed^^ This fic is totally gorgeous =3

that was amazing! :O

Bitter beginnings and sweet endings are truly the best in HitsuHina fics.

And this is one of the best.

I like this so much...gust feel the angst!XD

think i may have read this before but it's STILL a darn good fic!

it's a nice change of pace to the usual hitsu/hina fic and it's very very well written.

Very good story- a believeable recovery for Hinamori, and I think you did the characterisation beautifully.
I hope you write more.

...Oh WOW. This is amazing! This was so IC that it felt like I was reading the anime's script. I want it to happen, because it feels like it SHOULD have happened. You understand Hinamori and Hitsugaya on such a deep level. I LOVE how you see Hinamori's strength (which, as you mentioned, is often overlooked by many authors). And the fight was powerful and symbolic; I loved the way you wrote it. I could close my eyes and see it happening; it was fast-paced, intricate, and exciting. I'm amazed how you can make me laugh so hard in one fic, then bring me to the virge of tears in another.

I really wanted to cry by the end of the story. Not because I was happy, not because I was sad... just because I was so utterly moved by the flawless beauty and overpowering honesty of this story.

This may be one of the most amazing things I have ever, ever read. Thank you.

Oh, that was so awesome! I like how she takes out all her anger on him. Good job!

xoxo MimiMichie